New Writer, First Story Research.

[OutofKYGuy]

When I found literotica, I loved it and wanted to participate. I like writing but I want to put a lot of research into making it good. I want to write something I enjoy that others will too. Hey, isn't that the point?

So here goes... I'm a man that likes to lick pussy, and I want to write my first story about that, mostly drawing from personal experience and opinion. I've tried looking up other stories, but I don't see many. At least, not many about men who love it. What I want to know is, first, what are some favorite oral sex scenes of literotica for me to get more ideas of how to be descriptive, to learn from the masters so-to-speak? Like I said... first story.

Second, is there any interest in reading a story only about cunnilingus? I plan on writing it even if it is unpopular. This is more a question of my own curiousity. I want to know how readers feel about the subject, and whether my "not seeing stories about men who love to eat" is real or just a result of looking in the wrong places.

Third, and finally, what category would this be? It could be 'Loving Husbands,' but there's only 'Loving Wives.' Would it be Toys & Masturbation? That seems closest. Possibly Fetish? But hey, then what isn't? I'm almost of the opinion that the Literotica Gurus should create a new category for oral, but maybe I'm right, there isn't enough interest in foreplay alone.

Thanks for answering any of these questions, I'll be keeping a close eye.

 

[emap]

I am pretty sure there are some stories with just oral in them, actually quite a few though they tend to be the glory hole stories and usually gay stories.

I beleive there are a few with predominately oral, I've read one or two actually, though not one by a guy. So yes there is interest, I'm not sure how much you would get, but hey who cares anyway.

It's not like my stories get rave reviews, but I keep putting them out, have 8 now, another is undergoing editing, I made it a little long, silly me one has an H, three more are hovering close, I know I check for new public comments sometimes.

 

[Carnevil9]

I've seen some stories that are primarily or strictly about oral sex. I have one myself (see my sig line). I think they would be as popular as anything else, as long as they are interesting and well written beyond the mechanics of the sex.

Good luck, I hope you do write it.

And by the way, I'm sorry that you are out of KY. They sell it at Walgreens or CVS if you have one of those near you......Carney

 

[OutofKYGuy]

Thanks for mentioning that. In a way I'm glad you felt there weren't many written by guys... I suppose it saves me time looking. I'm working on my first rough draft today, but since it won't be finished I'd encourage everyone to continue posting.

 

[emap]

Well alot are written by guys, but they are gay glory hole stories so not many where a guy writes about eating a woman.

Carney I'm pretty sure he is saying he is out of Kentucky, or KY.

However, if you are out of Ky jelly you can find it in grocery stores, circle K, 7-11 or any of your run of the mill convenience stores.

 

[Fantasies_only]

When I found literotica, I loved it and wanted to participate. I like writing but I want to put a lot of research into making it good. I want to write something I enjoy that others will too. Hey, isn't that the point?

So here goes... I'm a man that likes to lick pussy, and I want to write my first story about that, mostly drawing from personal experience and opinion. I've tried looking up other stories, but I don't see many. At least, not many about men who love it. What I want to know is, first, what are some favorite oral sex scenes of literotica for me to get more ideas of how to be descriptive, to learn from the masters so-to-speak? Like I said... first story.

Second, is there any interest in reading a story only about cunnilingus? I plan on writing it even if it is unpopular. This is more a question of my own curiousity. I want to know how readers feel about the subject, and whether my "not seeing stories about men who love to eat" is real or just a result of looking in the wrong places.

Third, and finally, what category would this be? It could be 'Loving Husbands,' but there's only 'Loving Wives.' Would it be Toys & Masturbation? That seems closest. Possibly Fetish? But hey, then what isn't? I'm almost of the opinion that the Literotica Gurus should create a new category for oral, but maybe I'm right, there isn't enough interest in foreplay alone.

Thanks for answering any of these questions, I'll be keeping a close eye.

For me it's voyeurism and handjobs.
I originally thought 1 fetish stories would be great!
After using the Literotica Search, I came across this little gem:
Handjob Fascination

Although it is kinda hot, if it isn't enough to hold my full interest, it won't be to all of Literotica, but then again, it may work with a new catagory for Custom Fetishes.
This customized catagory links to a request forum for fetishes tailored to that person.

In this story, I got what I want with voyeurism (although not stripping or naked lesbian sex) and handjobs, but something is missing.
I would love to see a story along these lines from a male point of view (not same sex), including how it feels (I personally don't know) compared to masturbation.

My other 2 fetish fantasies are exhibitionism (would like public erections more than a limp penis) and fondling as many naked girls (18 or older) as I can (special interest in breasts, BREASTS, and more BREASTS)!

Sex must be consensual, but hand to genital touching can be non consensual.
F/F or F/F/F sex must be in public (crowded setting indoors or high traffic outdoor setting).

 

[rydia57]

Thanks for mentioning that. In a way I'm glad you felt there weren't many written by guys... I suppose it saves me time looking. I'm working on my first rough draft today, but since it won't be finished I'd encourage everyone to continue posting.

Can't wait to read your story then, KYGuy. I'm sure alot of women here would love to read it self included. Be graphic, be detailed, and if you're at lost for titles...."Eating at the HappyHole" comes to mind. Good luck!

 

[Carnevil9]

.....Carney I'm pretty sure he is saying he is out of Kentucky, or KY......

Yes, I assumed he meant he was from Kentucky. I was making a funny. Obviously not as funny as I thought!

Regarding fetish stories, I'd say write what you like. Don't worry if there isn't much demand for it. Disk space is cheap (or free, in this case), and there is bound to be somebody somewhere who will enjoy it. And even if there isn't, YOU will enjoy writing it and seeing it on line. You don't need outside validation. Just go for it!.......Carney

P.S. - title suggestions for KY Guy:
- Lickety Split
- Tongue in Groove
- When Irish Thighs are Smiling
- Snatching a Kiss and Vice Versa

 

[Fantasies_only]

For me it's voyeurism and handjobs.
I originally thought 1 fetish stories would be great!
After using the Literotica Search, I came across this little gem:
Handjob Fascination

Although it is kinda hot, if it isn't enough to hold my full interest, it won't be to all of Literotica, but then again, it may work with a new catagory for Custom Fetishes.
This customized catagory links to a request forum for fetishes tailored to that person.

In this story, I got what I want with voyeurism (although not stripping or naked lesbian sex) and handjobs, but something is missing.
I would love to see a story along these lines from a male point of view (not same sex), including how it feels (I personally don't know) compared to masturbation.

My other 2 fetish fantasies are exhibitionism (would like public erections more than a limp penis) and fondling as many naked girls (18 or older) as I can (special interest in breasts, BREASTS, and more BREASTS)!

Sex must be consensual, but hand to genital touching can be non consensual.
F/F or F/F/F sex must be in public (crowded setting indoors or high traffic outdoor setting).

OMG!
Guess what I found!
Vicki Lynn's Restaurant Adventure
Now that's really hot!
If only these story eliments were combined.
No food or mouth any place it doesn't belong, just the fetishes previously mentioned.

This post relates to the original subject as a custom fetish story.
I am not posting this just to let you know what I like.
I would like a custom story made with the above eliments (make sure to check and recheck your spelling, as if you really were making a book).

 

[OutofKYGuy]

LOL
Carney, you have some damn funny titles, although I think Lickety Split is taken. And, the play on words is intentional but the reality is I escaped KY, not that the state is all bad. Hey, what sounds more attractive, homespun KY jelly, or Iowa jelly. I have a first draft done, and I'll edit it a few times before using volunteer editors and posting it. I hope all of you are looking forward to it and post comments.

Fair warning though, it only has some boobs, and no exhibitionism or voyeurism or women giving men or women blowjobs by force for audiences.

 

[Texguy84]

While Lickity Split has indeed been taken already, it's still a good title and can be used again

If you want to make a sci-fi story about a guy eating out a virgin, call it "Where No Man Has Gone Before" (this could potentially be a celebrity story, but it would work just as well with Ensigns Honeysuckle and Smith). This could also be sci-fi/fantasy or first-time with this setting.

If one or more of the characters is from Down Under, you can call it "The Australian Kiss"

"Going Down Again" a love story about a pilot prone to plane crashes, and his girlfriend who loves cunnilingus.

 

[Fantasies_only]

While Lickity Split has indeed been taken already, it's still a good title and can be used again

If you want to make a sci-fi story about a guy eating out a virgin, call it "Where No Man Has Gone Before" (this could potentially be a celebrity story, but it would work just as well with Ensigns Honeysuckle and Smith). This could also be sci-fi/fantasy or first-time with this setting.

If one or more of the characters is from Down Under, you can call it "The Australian Kiss"

"Going Down Again" a love story about a pilot prone to plane crashes, and his girlfriend who loves cunnilingus.

That title has also been taken (Star Trek spoof).
With the idea that Captain Kirk, Mr. Spock, and McCoy are always together on away missions, someone thought to make a gay love triangle.
Kirk loves Spock, Spock wants Kirk, McCoy wants Kirk.

 

[snooper]

... story about a pilot prone to plane crashes ...

Likely to be a short story, perhaps even a VERY short story.

 

[Texguy84]

Likely to be a short story, perhaps even a VERY short story.

Not necessarily serious plane crashes (in fact, almost certainly not). Just minor hard-luck stuff like an engine constantly failing, forcing him to make emergency and crash landings in all variety of random places (a cow pasture, a soccer field (complete with the plane getting tangled in a goal net), a backroad somewhere, maybe one occasion where the wheelbrakes fail and he gets the nose stuck in the side of an aircraft hanger (actually happened to a NASA test pilot, much to his embarassment and his fellow pilots' amusement).

Just lots of stuff that leave people shaking their heads. You could maybe for the climax have the pilot and his girlfriend join the "Mile High Club" with the plane on autopilot, only to accidentally fly through some restricted airspace (like over a military base) and have the Air Force order them to land at the base for questioning.

"So, how could you not know you were flying into restricted airspace?"
"Well, so, Alice and I, we were flying along and it seemed like a great idea to..."

 

[snooper]

... have the pilot and his girlfriend join the "Mile High Club" with the plane on autopilot, ...
"So, how could you not know you were flying into restricted airspace?"
"Well, so, Alice and I, we were flying along and it seemed like a great idea to..."

You have obviously never flown in a private plane (eg Cessna Skyhawk). There is hardly room for a hand job in those, let alone anything more adventurous. If the plane is larger (eg, Citation) then there will be more than one pilot, which makes it a bit public.

Don't get me wrong, almost all of almost all the stories on Lit is impossible material. I just prefer practical impossibility (like 18 inch dicks buried to the hilt without killing the girl) to physically impossible things like a triple penetration in a compact car.

 

[Texguy84]

You have obviously never flown in a private plane (eg Cessna Skyhawk). There is hardly room for a hand job in those, let alone anything more adventurous. If the plane is larger (eg, Citation) then there will be more than one pilot, which makes it a bit public.

Don't get me wrong, almost all of almost all the stories on Lit is impossible material. I just prefer practical impossibility (like 18 inch dicks buried to the hilt without killing the girl) to physically impossible things like a triple penetration in a compact car.

Actually, I was visualizing something in a twin-engine format. It's been a while since I looked at my pilot manuals (was a flight student once apun a time until I realize how expensive that was going to be), but are twin-engine planes REQUIRED to have two pilots? Failing that, the girlfriend could also be a pilot. Explain the lack of passengers by saying either that they're flying a cargo plane or they're ferrying or test flying a passenger plane.

 

[Fantasies_only]

Actually, I was visualizing something in a twin-engine format. It's been a while since I looked at my pilot manuals (was a flight student once apun a time until I realize how expensive that was going to be), but are twin-engine planes REQUIRED to have two pilots? Failing that, the girlfriend could also be a pilot. Explain the lack of passengers by saying either that they're flying a cargo plane or they're ferrying or test flying a passenger plane.

Like double bladed "choppers", a twin engine plane requires 2 pilots and at least 1 competent co-pilot.
More controls are added for better navigation and extra engine fule.
The more stuff the plane has in it, the more of a chance something will break.

"Surely you can't be serious!"
"I am serious, and don't call me Shirly."
(Airplane)

 

[Texguy84]

Like double bladed "choppers", a twin engine plane requires 2 pilots and at least 1 competent co-pilot.
More controls are added for better navigation and extra engine fule.
The more stuff the plane has in it, the more of a chance something will break.

Erm... that would make three pilots, if I understand your math. The most pilots I've ever heard of an airplane needing is the B-52 (an eight-engine intercontinental bomber) with three or four pilots, and that was just because the extras would take over when one of the two main pilots was getting tired.

I can see where a multi engine plane might require a second pilot due to the increased complexity (the big Air Force planes do include a guy called a Flight Engineer who helps oversee all the various engines, hydraulics, fuel, etc. on the plane while the pilots fly), but I've never heard of one requiring three of them (A Co-pilot is, by definition, a pilot who is not the pilot in command of the plane)

 

[Fantasies_only]

Actually a co-pilot is like a pilot in training, on the fly so to speak.
He is there as a backup pilot for the second pilot, like the guy who takes the place of the Vice Presedent if he or she falls ill.

 

[emap]

B-52's have a four man pilot crew, and they have two crews because they fly for days.

The big commercial planes have 3 man crews, pilot, co pilot and navigation. Well navigation is sorta under named, he checks where they are, wind direction and speed, see's about storms in the area and so forth.

Private jets have two pilots, so one can sleep when he gets tired for long flights, smaller is up to the guy who owns it I think.

 

[Texguy84]

Actually a co-pilot is like a pilot in training, on the fly so to speak.
He is there as a backup pilot for the second pilot, like the guy who takes the place of the Vice Presedent if he or she falls ill.

Er, no. A pilot in training is a Student Pilot (or, if you are in the military, an Undergraduate Pilot). A Co-Pilot is a pilot helping the Pilot In Command, usually not as experienced as the PIC, but definitely a fully-qualified pilot.

And emap, IIRC, the longest mission a B-52 has flown on was a 36 hour bombing mission from Barksdale AFB, Louisianna to attack targets in Iraq, then returning to Barksdale (in Desert Storm). Pretty sure the B-52 doesn't carry more than two pilots usually, but they do have a rather large crew (pilots, navigator(s), weapons officers, flight engineer, etc.) Entirely possible that they could find room for a relief crew on those things if they wanted to though.

As for airliners, the newer ones only have two crewmen in the front, though some of the older ones have four or more (the positions of Flight Engineer and Navigator being eliminated due to increased computerization and automation of various aircraft systems).

 

[emap]

I'm not to big on planes, I got dragged to an air force musuem a while ago and they had a nuclear B-52 there, that was what they said, carries to full crews of pilots and navigation and then I beleive it was two tail gunners, though they rotated and are no longer needed since they use an automatic defense system.

Went on a tour of some sort, didn't really go around much in the tour for some odd reason but he really went on about the B-52. As for regular planes, well heck I've not gone on a flight in decades, I just remember seeing 3 guys in suits and those dorky hats they wear getting on the plane, one was HOT though. Sadly I had to wait to land before I could releive some pressure, I suppose good thing it was a fast flight.

 

[Texguy84]

I'm not to big on planes, I got dragged to an air force musuem a while ago and they had a nuclear B-52 there, that was what they said, carries to full crews of pilots and navigation and then I beleive it was two tail gunners, though they rotated and are no longer needed since they use an automatic defense system.

Went on a tour of some sort, didn't really go around much in the tour for some odd reason but he really went on about the B-52. As for regular planes, well heck I've not gone on a flight in decades, I just remember seeing 3 guys in suits and those dorky hats they wear getting on the plane, one was HOT though. Sadly I had to wait to land before I could releive some pressure, I suppose good thing it was a fast flight.

Heh, they used to have tail gunners on B-52s, but they don't anymore. One of my teachers was a B-52 pilot from Vietnam to Desert Storm, and he said he hated that they got rid of the tail gunner. Not because anyone thought he could HIT anything in that age of supersonic jets lobbing missiles, but beacuse he could see more of the plane than the pilots could, and could thus pass forward handy information such as "We're on fire, Boss" and "The Wing just fell off."

When I was flying over Christmas, I found myself lusting after an older redheaded stewardess on one of the flights.

 

[emap]

Oh my, I can just see the conversation being passed back and forth.

Yo pilot dude, we got some reigndeer and a fat man in a suit hanging off one wing, looks to be santa claus.
Well hell, here let me see if i can shake him off.
Nope he's still there, though my lunch is descending onto whatever country we are over.
Damn don't you know where we are? Hell me either, hang on gotta check the maps.
Umm, are we supposed to have the wheels coming down?
Hell no, and we are currently over Zimbabwe, hope you have more lunch back there, trying to put wheels back up by the way.
Well you can stop worrying about the wheels, they fell off. All I have left is dinner, what are you guys having up there?
We got roast duck and peasant under glass. Yeah the board is lit up, seems we lost the wheels and the hydraulics, trying to get back up hydraulics going.
I hope you mean pheasant under glass. Though i don't think the back up hydraulics will work either, my windows are gettign covered in the fluids.
Yeah sorry, pheasant. You know how it goes, co pilots from alabama. Yeah the hydraulics aren't working period, we can't turn much, but we will be fine after we drop the bombs we can fly past and bail out.
Ummm, I don't think we will be flying anywhere, the wing just fell off, on the plus side santa got free.
Well thank god for small favors, we got alot lighter, we can get a couple countries past our target. Wait, did you say the wing fell off?
Yeah, it's long gone now.
Oh man, I hope you got a parachute because we are going down fast.
You know I knew there was something I forgot, drain out the gas, we can stop just shy of the ground like Bugs did in the cartoons.
That won't work, hang on sending a chute back to you. What are you having for dinner anyway?
I got C-Rations that expired in 1956, I hope you have somebody else up there, the co-pilot just fell out of the plane.
Hey are you there?
Damn why do the pilots always get to leave first.

You should have asked the stewardess for a lay or three, us redheads tend to be horny little devils.

 

[Texguy84]

You should have asked the stewardess for a lay or three, us redheads tend to be horny little devils.

Indeed, I've never had sex in a galley before