New writer, FEEDBACK PLEASE!!!

[Sinner_18]

I have just had my story published. I would like any feedback. I have written 2 others not up yet.

Sinner_18

The story is called The Sin of a Lifetime

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[HSWriter]

I really liked your story. Keep up the good work.

 

[Katerina Val-Kyrie]

Hi, I read your story today, and thought it was very well done, as sinful as it was. What a naughty girl she was.... Keep up the good work! I have a few stories up as well, under romance. If you like the romantic kind of story line, I think you will enjoy. Looking forward to seeing more of your work. Katerina Val-Kyrie