New to Writing and my first story and audio are live!

[Iridescentrobot27]

Hi all! I'd love to get some feedback on my stories audio narration. I did it myself and am working on my voice acting skills. I hope to hear back from some folks on how I can improve. As I'm very passionate about this craft and am working to create more unique and fun sex positive stories for POC.

https://www.literotica.com/s/admiral-submission-pt-01-1

 

[Iridescentrobot27]

Loved it! You should be proud, eager for more!

Thank you so much!!!! I appreciate you taking the time to engage!

 

[Whanmore]

Your characters are definitely hot. Gunna look forward to reading more. I kinda wish they were longer and we got to know your characters a bit more before the sex.

 

[Iridescentrobot27]

Your characters are definitely hot. Gunna look forward to reading more. I kinda wish they were longer and we got to know your characters a bit more before the sex.

Thank you so much! The stories are a part of an erotic anthology I'm writing. The book will have alot more character and story development!

 

[Lotus_Kitty]

I know this is over two months old now but if you are still looking for feedback, I would be glad to give some.

 

[Iridescentrobot27]

I know this is over two months old now but if you are still looking for feedback, I would be glad to give some.

Yes please! I'm working on updating this series, but would love your feedback before I officially complete it

 

[Lotus_Kitty]

Good to hear! I'll message you about how to get me a draft copy if that's what you'd like to do.