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[Fairy Dreams]

purple Hi All!! I am new to this site and am anxious to get any kind of feed back or comments I can to increase my skill. I just started writing poetry and my curiosity on the opinion of fellow writers knows no bounds. I just posted my first poem and I hope everyone enjoys it. Please let me know what you think. The title is The Power of Passion.

Here's the link http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=27967

 

[daughter]

Hello

Fairy Dreams.

You might want to put a link on your thread.

I'll check you out.

Peace,

daughter

 

[tigerjen]

Very sensual poem you've got!

Hi Fairy Dreams!

I just want to take the opportunity to welcome you
to Literotica!

Just got to check out your poem "The Power of Passion"
which got a "5" from me. Very sensual, and very
detailed! Now that is what I call 'describing a
powerful orgasm'!

Keep up the terrific work, and good luck!

Again, welcome aboard!


Tigerjen

 

[Rrrosyn]

Congrats! Well done.

 

[Natalie Nessus]

Welcome and I also enjoyed the passion

 

[Debbie]

welcome to Lit.
I enjoyed your poem very much.