New to Lit and want to share a poem

[benedict]

~On the Rocker~

In the rural silence of a hot Texan summer
Outside I rest, tapping my foot as my hats tipped forward
Rocking
On my rocker
Stifling dry heat forces my eyes closed
And I am carried instantly to that moment in the midday
Where I held her
Sweat dripping off my lip brings me closer to her…
To her blissful forever
Salty sweetness
Ocean kisses floating in the mist
How her creamy brown skin glistened under the intense August rays
Holding my eyes captive
Taunting them
Silently
As if begging me to reveal what lies under those thin layers of summer linen
Snap! goes the bed sheets I’ hung on the line
Aware as they sway to a sudden welcome breeze
And now again
As I always was
I am sitting quietly
Rocking
On my rocker.

 

[benedict]

Any comments will be greatly appreciated!

 

[SeattleRain]

mmm a Texan dream, I like how it starts in the slow easy motion of the rocking, moves into thought, dream, and then snap back in

welcome! you are new to literotica, I am new to Texas

 

[Unbridled_Passion]

I really love the idea, not like anything else I have read around this site. I can feel the heat of summer coming as I live in Texas also. Good luck and I hope you stay around awhile-