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[mayeliza]

hi all,

i'm new to posting on this forum although i'm not new to literotica having submitted stories for more than a year now. i have recently started submitting stories again after an absence, and this time around i have decided to go for the full service instead of just the self service and therefore am requesting any comments, criticism, and the likes that you would like to offer to me to improve my writing. having read the posts on here on and off through the years i am aware that this forum houses a multitude of intelligent and talents persons. although i claim to be neither intelligent nor talented i will offer up my own comments to others.

thanks,
maye

 

[Octavian]

your request for feedback

You need to provide a link to your stories, Maye.

Here it is

http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=59770

Octavian