New Tale.

[Carl East]

I've just submitted my 150th story, it's called Hell's Gate. Let me know what you think when it gets accepted.

Thx

Carl

 

[KillerMuffin]

Muffie is beside herself with joy! (hence the use of third person)

 

[Carl East]

Muffie is beside herself with joy! (hence the use of third person)

I don't know if I could handle two of you, but I'd give it a damn good go.



Carl

 

[Carl East]

It's up Muffie, let me know what you think sweet buns.

Carl

 

[whisperingwords]

Carl East,

This morning I had the opportunity to read your story. I can't begin to tell you just how exciting it was. One of the most important aspects about your story was the fact that it was written with great thought - this came through in the words you so carefully used.

You didn't go overboard with description - you used just enough to get your points across rather nicely. The hint of eroticism was outstanding...I could see as well as feel those moments that were written about the demon lover...his victims...how he wanted Courtney. You gave me just enough titillation to pique my curiosity, which in turn kept me wanting more.

In case you're wondering, I really enjoyed it. The only problem is that it came to an end.

Thank you for a marvelous read, Carl East.

 

[Carl East]

In case you're wondering, I really enjoyed it. The only problem is that it came to an end.

Thank you for a marvelous read, Carl East.

You're very welcome and may I thank you for such a glowing analysis of my tale. You might also be interested to learn that I've just submitted another short story, this time it's eleven thousands words long. It's called The Making of a Friendship and will be up in a few days.

I'll also leave a link for others to get straight to 'Hell's Gate'

Thx again

Carl

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=130249

 

[Carl East]

You'll be glad to know whisperingwords that I've just submitted part two of Hell's Gate.

Enjoy

Carl

 

[whisperingwords]

You'll be glad to know whisperingwords that I've just submitted part two of Hell's Gate.

Enjoy

Carl

It's about time, Carl. What took you so long? (joking)

YES! Now I'll just wait patiently, tapping my foot, calming the excitement...

Thank you in advance - I know I will enjoy it.

 

[Carl East]

It's about time, Carl. What took you so long? (joking)

YES! Now I'll just wait patiently, tapping my foot, calming the excitement...

Thank you in advance - I know I will enjoy it.

Just thought you'd like to know I've just submitted part three, come on gal catch up. j/k

Carl

 

[Carl East]

well, I must have done something right, because my Hell's Gate story is flying up the chart. It's gone from page seven to five in just two days. Yes ME! lol

Carl

 

[whisperingwords]

Just thought you'd like to know I've just submitted part three, come on gal catch up. j/k

I'm taking notes, Carl. I don't want to miss a single part.

well, I must have done something right, because my Hell's Gate story is flying up the chart. It's gone from page seven to five in just two days. Yes ME! lol

Do you think it has anything to do with the fact that you happen to write an interesting and well written story, Carl?

Hmm, let's see now...you've already submitted part three and you've moved two pages...there must be a pattern here somewhere. lol

Congratulations to you! You must be feeling great right about now.

 

[Carl East]

Congratulations to you! You must be feeling great right about now.

I'd be happier if the site wasn't so god damn slow, (don't tell Laurel I said that) at publishing my tales. lol

Seriously though, I am feeling good about it. I've also opened up the public comments on all my stories and getting some nice reviews.



Carl

 

[whisperingwords]

Seriously though, I am feeling good about it. I've also opened up the public comments on all my stories and getting some nice reviews.

Carl

I think it's time to get my reading glasses and a cup of tea...it looks like I'll be doing lots of reading. This will keep me occupied while I wait for Part 2, Part 3, and The Making of a Friendship to magically appear.

Have a great rest of your day, Carl.

 

[Carl East]

I think it's time to get my reading glasses and a cup of tea...it looks like I'll be doing lots of reading. This will keep me occupied while I wait for Part 2, Part 3, and The Making of a Friendship to magically appear.

Have a great rest of your day, Carl.

I will certainly try sweet thing.

Carl

 

[Carl East]

I just submitted part four of Hell's Gate, I was going to finish it off with four but I'm having fun with it so I've decided to do one more.

Carl

 

[whisperingwords]

Carl,

My gosh, you certainly have been a busy man. By the time I'm finished reading all of your stories and each of the new parts to Hell's Gate, I'll need to purchase new reading glasses.

Although, that will mean I'll be able to read more of your words - maybe that's not such a bad thing after all. ha! (I was looking for an emoticon with glasses but couldn't find one.)

Today I read the story you wrote in which your father was able to stay alive because of the "angel" you met. That touched me so very much. I don't remember the title...sorry about that.

Keep writing, Carl, it's good for the soul...among other things. May I please ask you a question? Did you write the story about your father for a certain reason? I know that when I write something, there's always a part of me inside. I'm just curious.

 

[Carl East]

Keep writing, Carl, it's good for the soul...among other things. May I please ask you a question? Did you write the story about your father for a certain reason? I know that when I write something, there's always a part of me inside. I'm just curious.

I had my father in mind when I wrote that one because he'd died. It was called 'A Christmas Tale.'

Thx



Carl

 

[Carl East]

Just finished the series, five parts in all, so enjoy.

Carl

 

[Carl East]

Part two of Hell's Gate came out today, hope you enjoy it.

Carl

 

[whisperingwords]

Carl,

Please forgive me...I'm a little bit behind in my reading. I wish there were more than 24 hours in a day...especially right now.

When do you plan on taking a much-needed deep breath? With all of this writing, you need to, you know.

Thank you for pointing me in the right direction.

 

[Carl East]

Carl,

Please forgive me...I'm a little bit behind in my reading. I wish there were more than 24 hours in a day...especially right now.

When do you plan on taking a much-needed deep breath? With all of this writing, you need to, you know.

Thank you for pointing me in the right direction.

Dear Whisperingwords, you wouldn't believe some of the things happening in my life at the moment. Without wishing to bore you though with my problems I'll simply say that writing allows me to escape from the everyday mundane to a more imaginative world where anything is possible.



Carl

 

[whisperingwords]

Carl,

Your creative outlet is not only helping you - it's helping me, too, in many ways.

I've read and responded...that is all I'll write at this time.

 

[Carl East]

Carl,

Your creative outlet is not only helping you - it's helping me, too, in many ways.

I've read and responded...that is all I'll write at this time.

Thanks for the kind words gorgeous, I appreciate it.

Carl

 

[Carl East]

I can't seem to let this one go, I've just submitted part six after trying to finish it off in part five. lol

Never let it be said I didn't have one hell of an imagination.

Carl

 

[Carl East]

Number five came out today and I've just submitted number seven. I'm a writing machine. lol

Carl