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[BONNIEBREA]

New story for comment.

http://www.literotica.com/s/even-steven-3

 

[CWatson]

This is very, very good. Actually the only mistake I can find with it is that I think "smidgin" should be spelled with two I's, but it's colloquialism anyhow so there isn't necessary a "correct" spelling for it. And when I have written multi-paragraph essays to authors on this site about their spelling, grammar, punctuation and language usage, your perfection shines out all the more.

Damn fine work. Keep writing.

 

[Bramblethorn]

New story for comment.

http://www.literotica.com/s/even-steven-3

I liked it and gave it 5. Not a sexy story as such, but an interesting one.

 

[BONNIEBREA]

This is very, very good. Actually the only mistake I can find with it is that I think "smidgin" should be spelled with two I's, but it's colloquialism anyhow so there isn't necessary a "correct" spelling for it. And when I have written multi-paragraph essays to authors on this site about their spelling, grammar, punctuation and language usage, your perfection shines out all the more.

Damn fine work. Keep writing.

I appreciate your comments, CW. I don't have an editor looking at these, or a beta reader, or even a proofreader. So things slip by, and I hope they don't take too much away from the story.

 

[BONNIEBREA]

I liked it and gave it 5. Not a sexy story as such, but an interesting one.

Thanks Bramble for the comment here and on the story.

I can't say I've ever sat down at a keyboard with the intent of writing 'erotica.' Too many conventions and formulas have to be observed (as with any other sub-genre: private eye story, romance stuff, science fiction, westerns, etc.). I just write literary stories that don't shy away from or euphemize the sexual interactions between the characters. So I very much appreciate readers like you who are not just looking to read about how many inches went into how wet a receptacle.

Thank you for taking the time to comment.

BB

 

[Bramblethorn]

I can't say I've ever sat down at a keyboard with the intent of writing 'erotica.' Too many conventions and formulas have to be observed (as with any other sub-genre: private eye story, romance stuff, science fiction, westerns, etc.). I just write literary stories that don't shy away from or euphemize the sexual interactions between the characters. So I very much appreciate readers like you who are not just looking to read about how many inches went into how wet a receptacle.

Heh. I know the feeling; I'm about to stick my neck out by posting a no-sex-at-all chapter in Lesbian Sex, because it just didn't seem appropriate to have people screwing in this chapter. I'll be interested to see how it goes - although anybody who's made it through the first 11 chapters probably has a lot of tolerance for talky stuff anyway.

 

[AMoveableBeast]

Very well done. Nice chops.

 

[Lord_Gro]

I just write literary stories that don't shy away from or euphemize the sexual interactions between the characters.

Stroke stories written as stroke stories are boring. No matter how one interprets the word "stroke." I'd far rather read a well-written story about people which happens to contain some sex. This was nicely done.

And I think you chose well to post it in EC rather than LW. You know how the audience over at LW gets.

 

[SecondCircle]

Great story. A lot different from the usual you see here in several ways.