New Story....

[ColoradoMan]

Hi all...I posted a story called Night With an Angel..I'd love to know if you like it, love it, hate it, etc...suggestions are taken in stride!! Thanks

 

[Rumple Foreskin]

C Man,

You'll get more feedback if you post the URL for your story. RF

 

[ColoradoMan]

Good idea.. They are linked on my profile but here are direct links...thanks...

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=39335

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=39225

 

[Chantal Marchon]

Feed back

I liked the depth of the charcters in your story. It was more than just getting stuffed. In a relationship like Angel's, she should be exhibiting a great deal more panic at the possiblitiy of getting caught. Or at least worry.

Good luck with the voting

 

[ColoradoMan]

Thank you for the advice...I think in her situation...she really didn't care anymore...she was tired...and needed to FEEL... I will work on that issue more if I use it again though...I'm thinking I might get away from the cheating thing...but who knows...