New story...

[endeavour]

A few weeks ago I posted a new story which got very few reads. Someone suggested I post the link here. Any feedback would be appreciated.

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=197108

 

[msboy8]

A few weeks ago I posted a new story which got very few reads. Someone suggested I post the link here. Any feedback would be appreciated.

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=197108

Good story. I R.V.C.ed on it. I only have 1 question. What does this sentence mean? "She was no longer an old woman; she was a wanton craving more."

Try an editor, it worked for me.

 

[sleeping giant]

very good

like to slow down and go through some more detail..great story