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maidenlayer

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Hi all,

I've got a story pending approval called "The Love Boat".
If anyone wants to check it out heres the link.

http://www.chyoo.com:81/index.php/main.story.cover/2349

I'm still writing so if anyone has any inspiration...

Currently I'm being inspired by the OC on Channel 4, and the Nicole Kidman film called Dead Calm (I think). And of course one must always "write what you know".

Thanks all.
 
I've just realised it may not be good etiquette to post a link to an unapproved story.

Sorry everyone. Call me over eager and give me a slap. (ohh mistress :) ).
 
Don't worry about it. But if you are so eager, there are lots of stories that could use some writters. Try adding a few threads to some other stories. I think I speak for most of Chyoo when I say new threads are always welcome.



lostandfounder


Venus Rising
Love Under GrAy Skies
 
maidenlayer said:
I've just realised it may not be good etiquette to post a link to an unapproved story.

Don't see why not, particularly as some of the most active stories are probably the unapproved ones right now (e.g. almost any created in the last four months).

People can still add threads to unapproved stories (although in practise they tend not to). The only problem is that the story might suddenly be deleted, but that can happen to live stories too.
 
plot seems sound, the writing style is a little journalistic for my taste
 
Go for it.

Seems like a fun light idea, hopefully it will get approved before 2005 rolls around.

I am curious why you made it interactive as that always seems odd on a 2nd person POV?

:D
 
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