New Story:The Artist's Model

[Natalie Nessus]

Stimulated by the Authors Challenge in Authors Hangout

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=29250

with thanks to my editor

 

[Natalie Nessus]

Of course, I appreciate the feedback and criticisms

 

[lovetoread]

I liked it very much. Sent you a feedback email.

 

[Natalie Nessus]

Thank you

 

[Ayaka]

(sighing) I loved this, really loved this!

 

[Ayaka]

I didn't say enough - This is very sexy but in an elegant way. I'm guessing that women will love this.. I emailed this to a friend of mine ( ) I hope she will enjoy it. I loved this.

Girls, read this.

 

[P. B. Walker]

Not just women will like it.

I'm a man and I really enjoyed this story. A very sexy enjoyable read. I thought the story set up was excellent. Put me right there in Paris in 1929. I also liked how you described what was happening with all five of her senses, really let me know what she was feeling. In addition, I thought some of the imagery you used was excellent... my favorite: "my body taut like the stretched string of a violin. "

I dunno if because I'm a guy I can't enjoy this story as much as a woman would... but I still liked it

Great job.

- PBW

 

[Natalie Nessus]

Re: Not just women will like it.

I'm a man and I really enjoyed this story. A very sexy enjoyable read. I thought the story set up was excellent. Put me right there in Paris in 1929. I also liked how you described what was happening with all five of her senses, really let me know what she was feeling. In addition, I thought some of the imagery you used was excellent... my favorite: "my body taut like the stretched string of a violin. "

I dunno if because I'm a guy I can't enjoy this story as much as a woman would... but I still liked it

Great job.

- PBW

Merci, I am glad you enjoyed it. It was written for women and I am glad it had a impact ( mild impact?) on you

 

[P. B. Walker]

Re: Re: Not just women will like it.

Merci, I am glad you enjoyed it. It was written for women and I am glad it had a impact ( mild impact?) on you

mmmm... definitely more than mild. Who knows what might have occurred had I not read it while at work... <winks>. Again, good work, keep 'em coming.

- PBW