http://www.chyoo.com/index.php/main.story.cover/7427
What do you all think? It may be a bit complicated in certain respects. And the Concepts and Definitions aren't fully done. The two books that make up the inspiration though are 1764 pages combined so I had to simplify a lot. And that's not even getting into their FTL devices and other things...uh...any questions I'll try and answer in that thread or here, but this isn't of course canon. What is there is what is the basis for what I think is a good erotica tale. I would really like some authors to help out (I've been having a lot of writer's block recently, I just finished these to books I think that's why I threw this together, inspiration, you know?)
What do you all think? It may be a bit complicated in certain respects. And the Concepts and Definitions aren't fully done. The two books that make up the inspiration though are 1764 pages combined so I had to simplify a lot. And that's not even getting into their FTL devices and other things...uh...any questions I'll try and answer in that thread or here, but this isn't of course canon. What is there is what is the basis for what I think is a good erotica tale. I would really like some authors to help out (I've been having a lot of writer's block recently, I just finished these to books I think that's why I threw this together, inspiration, you know?)
