New story for the literati: God forbid, a thread related to authoring

[Pure]

All you literati, criticati, masters of the word, seers into the depths of the human heart; also for all you of neural imaginings, thought-controlled servo-mechanisms, etc.

Check out this ch 1 of a story, Ob Seen, in the Story Discussion Circle, and post your comments.

https://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=283716

It by one of Literotica's most talented writers, neonlyte--'Wills,' in a former life. (note, there's no graphic sex; it's not porn).

 

[Guest]

Thank you very much, Pure. I did not know Neon was Wills. I would read anything by him.

Perdita

 

[Guest]

What are yous? Masochists?

 

[Guest]

What are yous? Masochists?

Haven't you heard of The Pleasure of the Text?

Perdita (Why do I respond to you?)

 

[Guest]

As if you don't know.

 

[Guest]

As if you don't know.

Crap, you made me larf. But I was talking to myself! P.

 

[Rumple Foreskin]

All you literati, criticati, masters of the word, seers into the depths of the human heart; also for all you of neural imaginings, thought-controlled servo-mechanisms, etc.

Hey, Neon/Wills writes good. Can a no-talent, redneck dumb-ass crash the party? Please?

Perdita, you shouldn't toy with CV's afflictions.

Rumple Foreskin

 

[Guest]

Perdita, you shouldn't toy with CV's afflictions.

Aw, but Rumps, it always makes me day (and it's soooooooo easy).

Perdita

 

[Rumple Foreskin]

Aw, but Rumps, it always makes me day (and it's soooooooo easy).

Perdita

Okay. But when you're through, be sure to recap and wipe him off before you put him back behind the bar.

Rumple Foreskin

 

[neonlyte]

Perdita,
Thank you for your words, you've no idea how much that means to me, I'm sincerely flattered.

CV - as usual, your insight's astonish. Your prompt attention to commenting on my stories gladdens me, but for the last time, I am not a girl and don't want to do those things with you.

Rumpole,
Thank you for your encouragement, I've posted a reply to your initial comments on the SDG.

Neon

 

[Guest]

Neon/Wills: I've missed you. Glad you're here. Will read you very soon.

Perdita

 

[shereads]

All you literati, criticati, masters of the word, seers into the depths of the human heart; also for all you of neural imaginings, thought-controlled servo-mechanisms, etc.

Check out this ch 1 of a story, Ob Seen, in the Story Discussion Circle, and post your comments.

https://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=283716

It by one of Literotica's most talented writers, neonlyte--'Wills,' in a former life. (note, there's no graphic sex; it's not porn).

Not porn?

Is nothing sacred anymore?

Neon shines, of course. Even without graphic sex. Thank you for the link, J.

 

[neonlyte]

Re: Re: New story for the literati: God forbid, a thread related to authoring

Not porn?

Is nothing sacred anymore?

Neon shines, of course. Even without graphic sex. Thank you for the link, J.

I do apologise for the lack of porn in Ob Seen.

I do write porn from time to time, check out 'Bonking for Britain' then I think you will agree, my word play is better than my foreplay.

I look forward to your comments if you can find the time.

 

[shereads]

Re: Re: Re: New story for the literati: God forbid, a thread related to authoring

I do apologise for the lack of porn in Ob Seen.

I do write porn from time to time, check out 'Bonking for Britain' then I think you will agree, my word play is better than my foreplay.

I look forward to your comments if you can find the time.

Do they have to be intelligent comments?

Pressure.

This could be just the excuse I've been waiting for to become a crack addict.

 

[neonlyte]

Re: Re: Re: Re: New story for the literati: God forbid, a thread related to authorin

Do they have to be intelligent comments?

Do you have other ones?

By the way, about the tomatoes (other thread) the numbers are on the bottom.

 

[shereads]

Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: New story for the literati: God forbid, a thread related to auth

Do you have other ones?

If you're looking forward to the comments, I can't just cut and paste my standard, pre-fab modular comments.

"Your story brought me to (tears/climax/my knees/a higher state of consciousness/four o'clock, just in time for The People's Court) and gave me a new appreciation for (pantyhose/kickboxing/hamsters/marital love). You show rare sensitivity in your use of (latex/hydraulics/animal byproducts/some sort of literary device)."

I can't do that now. You've put me on the spot. I'll try again when I'm awake.

By the way, about the tomatoes (other thread) the numbers are on the bottom.

 

[dr_mabeuse]

I just started reading, but already I'm wondering: can a blind person be said to have a "photographic memory"?

---dr.M.

 

[neonlyte]

I just started reading, but already I'm wondering: can a blind person be said to have a "photographic memory"?

---dr.M.

dr.M
That point is dealt with later in the the story, a character raises the same question. The therapist know's what he means when he uses this phrase, and it alluded to further down in the the chapter where he talks about creating his 'own visual images' that do not have to bear relationship to anyone elses.

In real life, some blind people claim to build a visual reference composed from touch, smell, sound... we cannot of course know what they actually see.

Neon

 

[Guest]