New story feedback

[GoodyGoodyTwoShoes]

Hi Everyone. I had a story posted earlier this week under the Incest/Taboo category. It's not technically incest because the "Daddy" in the story took the female in the story in at a young age and she's his daughter's best friend. However, the story plays heavily on incest and forbidden themes. I've gotten some interesting E-mail feedback from people who didn't like that it wasn't actually incest or they were confused about the realtionship. I have gotten good comments and E-mails as well, but I'm curious to see what fellow authors think. There is extremely rough sex in it, so be prepared.

A Sweet Little Melody

http://www.literotica.com/s/a-sweet-little-melody

Thanks for any feedback in advance!