new story completed; need an editor

[Lazarus]

Hi all,

I just finished writing a new story and would love to have someone review it. It is a fantasy, group sex genre.

I have been criticized in my writing for not enough emotion and not so great spelling.

If'd you'd like to help just PM me and I will send the file.

Lazarus

 

[flyer333]

i have submitted myself as an editor to Lit. Currently not approved but never had a submission rejected. I will do this for you if you'd like. I wil be honest and helpful. My profession is teaching so I will not write it for you but I will mentor you.

 

[BlackSnake]

i have submitted myself as an editor to Lit. Currently not approved but never had a submission rejected. I will do this for you if you'd like. I wil be honest and helpful. My profession is teaching so I will not write it for you but I will mentor you.

That's a good start. You are offering to be an editor and a mentor? That is a very kind thing to do.