New Story: "A Prize Unlike Any Other"

[Edogawakun]

http://www.chyoo.com/index.php/main.story.cover/8153

A second story. Not much I can say here that hasn't already been said in the story.

As always, I'm a feedback junkie and I'm looking for contributors. Hope you enjoy and add on.

 

[Zingiber]

bump!

Putting a real Chyoo thread above the spam. Good wishes on your second story. (I only see one under your name -- did you use another username for your first story, or is it still waiting approval?)

-Z.

 

[Edogawakun]

The one listed here is still awaiting approval, the other under my name is a different story that's already been approved. I figure since I didn't violate any rules, my grammar is passable at the very least, and as far as I can see all stories that clear those two hurdles go through on CHYOO (in fact, some stories that don't clear those hurdles still go through), I could make this thread a little prematurely. And besides, what's the harm in being a little optimistic?

 

[Edogawakun]

Back from my off-site projects, and with the first of this story's characters up for reading and expanding.

http://www.chyoo.com/index.php/main.story.page/170013/151719

Also, for all writers, I have included a list of the diary's powers. I'm satisfied with what's there, but I feel there could be more, so feel free to contribute rules in this topic as well as through threads and emails. Anyway, the master list is here:

http://www.chyoo.com/index.php/main.story.page/170016

 

[Edogawakun]

Now a thread that sets up the brunette MC to get beyond largely expository threads.

http://www.chyoo.com/index.php/main.story.page/171306