New Story - a devilish delight?

[Jaymal]

Hi - it's new, it's in the Halloween Contest and it might involve Satan. Or maybe not.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=442983

Hope you enjoy. But at any rate, all constructive feedback appreciated.

Jaymal

 

[mia_erotica]

to the King of Halloween porn

Gabrielle & the Devil is sensational. VERY VERY SEXY.

 

[Bianca_Sommerland]

Read it, RCV'd and honestly, very much enjoyed it. I liked Gabrielle, she was an interesting character. The twist at the end was cool. I really thought, right until the last minute, that the guy was the one Gabriella was being set up with.

Your discriptions were awesome. I have to read some more of you work.

 

[Darkniciad]

RVC'd already, and dropped you a note. As I said in the PC, this one came highly recommended, and it didn't dissapoint.

 

[mia_erotica]

Jaymal fan club

It's great to see so much positive feedback for G & the D, Jaymal. You deserve it! I hope you will write another story soon.

 

[Jaymal]

Devil of a response

Thanks to everyone who's checked out the story and left feedback - hugely appreciated.

There are stories in the pipeline, Mia, but the day job is getting in the way of production!

 

[mia_erotica]

good to know

Thanks to everyone who's checked out the story and left feedback - hugely appreciated.

There are stories in the pipeline, Mia, but the day job is getting in the way of production!

I'm surprised to hear that you are not a professional writer, unless you are and you write non-erotic by day?

 

[Jaymal]

To all those angelic Lit readers...

Thanks once again for the Lit-love re Gabrielle and the Devil. You all make a guy want to keep on writing.

Jaymal

 

[mia_erotica]

congrats

Congratulations on placing in the Halloween contest, Jaymal. I was rooting for you!

 

[Jaymal]

Feeling the Hearts

Thanks for all the encouragement, Mia, the contest was fun. Congratulations on the nasty pleasure that was Doctor Cockburn's Medicine. Ironically, your story was way more fiendish than mine!

 

[mia_erotica]

bump

 

[Jaymal]

Thanks Mia, you're a gem!