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[Shaved_wench]

Hi I have recently posted 3 new stories. I would appreciate it if some seasoned authors would read them and give me feedback, positive or negative. I just want to make sure that the stories I post are well-written and enjoyable. Voting would also be appreciated! I'm attempting to link the stories to here but if that doesn't work,I will give you plenty of info on how to find them quickly and easily. My stories are listed under Shaved_wench.
The Perfect Anniversary Gift is under Toys & Masturbation and the link is http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=104940
The Perfect Anniversary Gift Ch.2 is under Anal and the link is http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=106313
Visions is under Lesbian Sex and the link is http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=106319

Once again I would appreciate any feedback and votes. I will answer all email. Thanks and keep reading Literotica...it is one of my favorite sites.

Thanks,
Shaved_wench

 

[TabooTeller]

Hi I have recently posted 3 new stories. I would appreciate it if some seasoned authors would read them and give me feedback, positive or negative. I just want to make sure that the stories I post are well-written and enjoyable. Voting would also be appreciated! I'm attempting to link the stories to here but if that doesn't work,I will give you plenty of info on how to find them quickly and easily. My stories are listed under Shaved_wench.
The Perfect Anniversary Gift is under Toys & Masturbation and the link is http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=104940
The Perfect Anniversary Gift Ch.2 is under Anal and the link is http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=106313
Visions is under Lesbian Sex and the link is http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=106319

Once again I would appreciate any feedback and votes. I will answer all email. Thanks and keep reading Literotica...it is one of my favorite sites.

Thanks,
Shaved_wench

I read all three and even though they are not my usual cup of tea I think they were well written and a turn on. esp. the first two. Very erotic with the anal sex for the guy. I wonder though with the way they were in he kitchen in the second story, if they don't reverse roles at times and he becomes the Master. I might just read more about that couple

 

[Shaved_wench]

Difinite Role Reversals in Future Chapters

Thank you TabooTeller for reading my stories. The roles will be reversed in future chapters, plus some other surprises will be brought into play in this couple's life. I'm glad that you found them to be a turn on and written well also. That is my main concern I know that there is one mistake in Chapter 2, but I had already submitted the story before I found it. I would very much like to correct it but don't know how to do that. I am presently working on Chapter 3 and 4.

Thanks again for your input.

Sincerely,
Shaved_wench

 

[damppanties]

Hi I have recently posted 3 new stories. I would appreciate it if some seasoned authors would read them and give me feedback, positive or negative.

I'm no seasoned author but I read your Visions. It was well-written and refreshingly different from the usual stories found here. A couple of times I was confused with the wording but overall it flowed well and I like the way you use words. Keep writing.

I know that there is one mistake in Chapter 2, but I had already submitted the story before I found it. I would very much like to correct it but don't know how to do that.

From the Literotica FAQs:

I've re-edited my story and want to replace the posted version with my new edited one. How do I do this?

No problem! Simply submit the new version as you submitted the old one, only adding the word "EDITED" to the title (ex. "My Sexy Firefighter Ch. 03 - EDITED") so that we know to replace the old text with the new text. We will then replace the original text with the new text. Your story will retain its previous voting score and views.

 

[TabooTeller]

Re: Difinite Role Reversals in Future Chapters

Thank you TabooTeller for reading my stories. The roles will be reversed in future chapters, plus some other surprises will be brought into play in this couple's life. I'm glad that you found them to be a turn on and written well also. That is my main concern I know that there is one mistake in Chapter 2, but I had already submitted the story before I found it. I would very much like to correct it but don't know how to do that. I am presently working on Chapter 3 and 4.

Thanks again for your input.

Sincerely,
Shaved_wench

You are welcome but I am not much of an editor, since I am not as critical as some are so there could be some who could find more things that are wrong but I still say they are a basically good. I do read a lot. I don't know if you could personal message me when the next chapters are out but I would be interested in role reversal and the surpises unless they go a lot further into Bondage.

TabooTeller