new sexual syns

apexpark

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hey i need some sexual synonyms for a story im writing.
if you have no idea what im talking about:
cum = man juice, man sauce, jizz, spunk......

i need some new words!
 
don't forget " cream"

or "goo" as in " great gobs of..." :rolleyes:
 
I am not sure if that helps, but some months ago, there was a thread on Lit, about slang words.

You know, stuff like: pussy, glory hole, front door ....

Maybe with some search, you will find this thread. I know, it was a real big collection of sexual expressions
 
Hmmmmmmmm

Well not being an expert but,

soft moist love chamber invaded by an iron hard bed snake, thrusting and twisting inside her until releasing a huge quantity of redundant sailors, (discharged semen), emptying the contents of his balls into her.

Man fat, baby juice, porridge, joy juice, think of a name it will fit.

pops.........:D
 
To quote Alex de Kok

Why didn't you folk just go here?

It's been up since February [2002], and Whisper invited contributions.
 
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If you keep mentioning the same thing, synonyms or not, you need to rewrite. She did this with the semen, she did that with the semen, she did the other with the semen -- it's just as monotonous with synonyms substituted. Recast the sentences to be more allusive, so you don't have to keep mentioning it.

It's all about sex, you say, so you have to keep mentioning it? No. It's also about people, but it's equally bad to keep using synonyms for them: the blonde, the 18-year-old, and so on. It's perfectly possible to write good prose alternating 'Karen' and 'she' all the way through.

As in any kind of writing, if you're repeating yourself you need to sit back and cut out the need for it.
 
fuck hole

fuck hole, butt hole, fuck organ, slippery and sinking fuck hole, hot juice
 
I knew I should have turned left at Albuquerque. How do I get back to the Author's Hangout?
 
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