New poet

[JUDO]

Submitted my first. Feel free to tear me a new one. I really don't know what I'm doing, but the Muse was biting my ear and wouldn't let go.

So, pound of flesh and here it is.

I Want A Girl

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=17452

Let me know how to get better and, hopefully, how it made you feel.

- Judo