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lilroundman

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Hi, I'd like to use my own character. His name is Ultimate. Here is the run down on him.

Powers: He shoots energy beams from his hands. When he is extremely mad he fires an extremly powerfull beam of engery that knocks out or kills his enemies(Depends on how powerfull he decides to make it), he has an off the charts IQ. He can be a History teacher for the school and help Jean Grey out in the labs. He is quick in hand to hand combat, he can fly, and he has super human strength.

Other: He has greyish blue eyes, that flash with energy when he is anoyed, and turn white when pissed off. He wears a white rubber latex suit with black and blue bolts running up and down it. He is quiet unless spoken to. Which kind of makes him look like he is brooding over something that happened to him in his past.

I plan on bringing him in as a mysterious stranger that shows up at the school's front door.

I'll bring him in at a appropriate time in the story.
 
So your saying that Ultimate is an ultimate character. With no weeknesses, room 101's, or deficiancies. He is able to wit and braun his way out of any situation imaginable.


Even for something like the x-men, everyone has a weekness. SOmething that someone else can get inside their guards with. And quite frankly, if your character is perfect, how can you use him? 80% of the fun in here is working your way out of problems with what little (key word here, Little) you have at your disposal.

Let's look at some of the most powerfull characters in history and their weeknesses. Apockolypse was a whimp without his lazerus chamber. My Ether thawed in the face of heat. Lokken could only avoid old age. Vixen was still human, Timebomb was..... yelled at alot, etc..... do you get my picture? or don't you know the characters I am mentioning.
 
Even though he is strong, he is still capable of getting injured during a battle. Never said he was impervious to an attack, just said he was quick on his feet. You could also best him with mind control....he may have a high IQ but anyone who isn't a mind reader can have their thoughts altered in some way. Which means if a person with psychic abilities messes with his head they can make him a vegetable and beat him. See what I mean....he may seem like the Ultimate guy.....but nobody is perfect like you said....he can be beaten....it just takes a lot to do it. Even the X-Men had trouble removing Jagarnaut's helmet to deafeat him....
 
Ahh... thanks for revieling his fatal flaw. Now things aught to get interesting....
 
Cryo said:
Lokken could only avoid old age, Timebomb was..... yelled at alot]


Big meanie. I ought to pound you a few times for that. And who said Lokken was old. But then again, even with all his power, he did age. Still, you monkeying meanie, I ought to pound you a few times.
 
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