New member, New BDSM story

[LonDom]

Hello fellow Lit fans!

I have been reading your stories for years, and have now decided to post a few of my own. The first one is up, and I'd love any feedback you might have, good or bad. The story is located at

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=124206

I hope I did that right

Thanks in advance for the feedback. Looking forward to sharing more stories in the near future.

LonDom