[NEW] [Incest/Taboo] Step-Daughters Delights

[Timbledore]

Hello everyone.

I am a new writer here and have had my first story approved and published. I hope to write a lot more here for everyone and just wanted to get some feedback on my first story.

Author Name: Timbledore
Story Name: Step-Daughter Delights
Category: Incest/Taboo
Link: http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=442597

I have additional chapters in the works and Thank You to everyone that has already left feedback. My Step-Daughter is sitting next to me and loves the responses so far.

Thanks again all!

 

[Timbledore]

Thanks again all for the feedback and comments! I have written and uploaded chapter 2 of our adventures. It has been submitted and is currently awaiting approval. I hope you like this one as much as the first!

 

[Timbledore]

Chapter 3 is also up for review and approval. I hope you all like them! Please keep the comments and feedback coming. These are my first submissions of my writing of any kind, so all feedback good and bad accepted. I hope to be a long time contributor to this site.

I have another story in the works as well as more of this one, so keep checking back!

 

[Timbledore]

Chapters 2 and 3 are published. I have Chapter 4 working now and also will be publishing another story (non-incest).

Thanks everyone for the votes, feedback and comments. Keep them coming!!

 

[tenpointsover]

As a veteran of over 40 years of writing porn and porn movie scripts, I tink your story has some merit but i is very typical and offers no real hook. It is pretty ordinary, even conveluted. Keep trying! You have talent, nmow use it.

 

[Timbledore]

As a veteran of over 40 years of writing porn and porn movie scripts, I tink your story has some merit but i is very typical and offers no real hook. It is pretty ordinary, even conveluted. Keep trying! You have talent, nmow use it.

Hey, thanks for the comments. Can you provide some examples and specific comments on the text? These are my first attempts and writing. With you having 40 years writing, it would be invaluable.

Thanks again!