New Idea

[foxylady2]

Before I start I do not want any teasing or joking as I had previously with other threads. If you want to help me that is fine but if not don`t bother. Here is my idea.

A single woman reiceves a diamond from her grandfather`s will. The diamond is worn in a shape of a heart pendant. Since she had worn it she had been shot and stalked upon. The stalker turns out to be her hero but the hero is a undercover cop and has been working on a case of the missing diamond. He looked after her and made sure she did not get hurt. She got shot at his holiday cottage but luckily it was only a graze. That is when he told her about the diamond she is wearing. Her grandfather had stolen it from a museum in Malyisa years before he got shot. The heroine ( grandaughter ) was told he died of a heart attack. She handed back the diamond to the police and she never saw the hero again until a few weeks later when she was back at wrok. He proposed. End of story.

Title of this idea will be called Eternity.

How do I now progress this idea?

Hope it makes sense.

 

[Carnevil9]

Before I start I do not want any teasing or joking as I had previously with other threads. If you want to help me that is fine but if not don`t bother.

I think you are in the wrong forum if you don't want any teasing or joking along with meagre doses of help.

For what it's worth, the story sounds nice and well plotted, but not very erotic......Carney

 

[DarkBee]

Well, there's always the Non-erotic category...

Anyway, the plot is nice, you could explore all the different parts of it and still make a nice read. I wonder if there's gonna be sex in it too.

 

[AsylumSeeker]

Before I start I do not want any teasing or joking as I had previously with other threads. If you want to help me that is fine but if not don`t bother. Here is my idea.

A single woman reiceves a diamond from her grandfather`s will. The diamond is worn in a shape of a heart pendant. Since she had worn it she had been shot and stalked upon. The stalker turns out to be her hero but the hero is a undercover cop and has been working on a case of the missing diamond. He looked after her and made sure she did not get hurt. She got shot at his holiday cottage but luckily it was only a graze. That is when he told her about the diamond she is wearing. Her grandfather had stolen it from a museum in Malyisa years before he got shot. The heroine ( grandaughter ) was told he died of a heart attack. She handed back the diamond to the police and she never saw the hero again until a few weeks later when she was back at wrok. He proposed. End of story.

Title of this idea will be called Eternity.

How do I now progress this idea?

Hope it makes sense.

Penelope was saddened by the death of her grandfather, the one person who cared for her so much. The fact that he'd left her the pendant quieted her stammering heart. It eased her rambling mind, and consoled her very heart.

Tears tugged at the corners of her eyes but defiantly refused to flow.

"No," she whispered angrily.

I don't believe in joking, hazing, or belittling. Just helping.

You've seen what I can, or perhaps can't, bring to a story. I'm willing to help if you're willing to share and write what you can. I won't write your story, but I'll help you write your own. And I'll take pride in knowing that I helped you do it.

 

[Fantasies_only]

Before I start I do not want any teasing or joking as I had previously with other threads. If you want to help me that is fine but if not don`t bother. Here is my idea.

A single woman reiceves a diamond from her grandfather`s will. The diamond is worn in a shape of a heart pendant. Since she had worn it she had been shot and stalked upon. The stalker turns out to be her hero but the hero is a undercover cop and has been working on a case of the missing diamond. He looked after her and made sure she did not get hurt. She got shot at his holiday cottage but luckily it was only a graze. That is when he told her about the diamond she is wearing. Her grandfather had stolen it from a museum in Malyisa years before he got shot. The heroine ( grandaughter ) was told he died of a heart attack. She handed back the diamond to the police and she never saw the hero again until a few weeks later when she was back at wrok. He proposed. End of story.

Title of this idea will be called Eternity.

How do I now progress this idea?

Hope it makes sense.

First of all WTF?!

Let's first address the title of this thread:
New Idea (non erotic), unless of course it is, which means you have to spice up the details a bit.

What the heck does that have to do with eternity?
Now if it was a Romeo and Juliet kind of death vow I would understand, or even a ghost of a past lover who forever walks this Earth in surch of his lost love (mummy scenario).

What actual outcome does the Pink Panther scenerio you described have, and how would you forward the story on just that piece of information?

It makes no sense to note the diamond is heart shaped unless you plan to make that part of the storyline.
Perhaps it originaly belonged to her Great Grandfather who was honnered a Purple Heart, and bought the heart shaped piece (to remember him for his bravery) for his fiance before he died, but she hawked her belongings and didn't know it was in the box.

 

[Fantasies_only]

Penelope was saddened by the death of her grandfather, the one person who cared for her so much. The fact that he'd left her the pendant quieted her stammering heart. It eased her rambling mind, and consoled her very heart.

Tears tugged at the corners of her eyes but defiantly refused to flow.

"No," she whispered angrily.

I don't believe in joking, hazing, or belittling. Just helping.

You've seen what I can, or perhaps can't, bring to a story. I'm willing to help if you're willing to share and write what you can. I won't write your story, but I'll help you write your own. And I'll take pride in knowing that I helped you do it.

I believe in helping as well.
I just can't think of how this story should take shape.

 

[lustyd]

nice, i like it

 

[foxylady2]

Thank you lustyd. There is a tiny bit of erotic in it but not much. It will be in the hero`s cabin scene where the heroine gets grazed by a bullet.

 

[foxylady2]

Ok here is a scene that I want to put down on paper and out of my head.

The heroine as you know gets shot but luckily it was just a graze. While the hero attends to the wound... well you kind of get the picture. Any of you like to give me a head start on this. I`ll finish it.

 

[gauchecritic]

Being a transplanted South Korean, Mai Kammer found himself in a lot more funny, that's funny unusual not funny ha-ha, situations than he would have believed possible for a law enforcement official.

The usual round of interpreting, negotiating and generally bull-shitting his way into or out of bad situations was getting thin these days. What with the influx of Eastern Europeans and the ever present Latinos, his soft office job out of the local Pennsylvania office was being swamped with bi, tri and multi-lingual professionals squeezing him into an ever smaller patch of crime scene encounters.

The gloaming light of the late sun made impenetrable mirrors of his holiday cottage windows, so the first sign he had of an intruder was when he turned the handle of the door and saw the stumbling figure in the half-light interior.

Mai, neither paused nor broke stride as he crossed the threshold with his trusty glock in his fist. He stepped through and fired once, twice then stopped, shocked and ashen faced at the scream and twisting naked body flung across and down, back and to the left, swirled in a cascading ribbon of chestnut hair.