new fantasy/lesbian/futa/opera story - GrushaVashnadze

[GrushaVashnadze]

Hello! I've posted a new story, entitled Metamorphoses. Here it is:

https://www.literotica.com/s/metamorphoses-2

Being new to Literotica, I'm still working out the culture surrounding categories. I've put this story in Sci-Fi/Fantasy, because it seemed the least bad place to put it. It's definitely a fantasy, but mainly it's a lesbian futa romance.

I'd be happy to get your feedback, not just on the categorisation, but on the story itself. Thanks!

Grusha

 

[AlinaX]

You really don't need the foreword.

 

[labeltornoff]

Agreed, the forward isn't needed. I liked the story and left a comment.

 

[AlinaX]

Mmm... very poetic and lots of fun. Love the Strauss too.
I might question some of the word choices, but n/m.

 

[ElectricBlue]

Gloriously over-written, and the "kultural" references will be all too hard for many, but a rollicking yarn.

Agree with the others, the preamble is unnecessary. Never explain in a story, always reveal .

 

[yukonnights]

As I've said in my comment on your story, I'm a fan. No story is ever perfect, but in the two you've published what I see is a rather unique talent/style that grabs me by the throat and pulls me into your unusual worlds. I have no doubt that you'll listen to what some of the other writers say and hone your craft even sharper. This one was another fun read for me and I'm glad you've joined this merry band of writers.

 

[GrushaVashnadze]

Thanks, everyone, for your feedback and encouragement.
And here's chapter 2 of Metamorphoses for you:
https://www.literotica.com/s/metamorphoses-ch-02?page=2

Grusha

 

[AlinaX]

By the way, you're linking to page 2.

 

[RoperTrace]

. .

 

[GrushaVashnadze]

Oops, sorry, Alina. Newbie mistake. This one is hopefully correct:
https://www.literotica.com/s/metamorphoses-ch-02

And RoperTrace, thank you. You are too kind. Am I allowed to link to my private blog from here? The story Trace is referring to is called And There Came Two Angels to Sodom, and you can read it on the front page of superbsmut.blogspot.com

Given that Literotica won't be publishing that particular story, I am guessing that it's OK to mention here where else to read it...? (Please correct me if I am wrong; I'm still working out how the rules work here...)

Once again, thank you for your support and encouragement!

 

[labeltornoff]

Thanks, everyone, for your feedback and encouragement.
And here's chapter 2 of Metamorphoses for you:
https://www.literotica.com/s/metamorphoses-ch-02?page=2

Grusha

An enjoyable episode. Lucy's tone was different from Daphne's, more breezy, less wrapped in operatic lore, a good change. The narration's pace was quick, almost breathless. Was that intentional? After running to catch up with the action, I found myself liking the faster, slightly more frenetic pace.

I expected Giovanni to rush into the private room to see what was wrong. He must have been busy in the kitchen. I am interested to see what Daphne, Lucy, and Mimi decide to do next.

The last scene with Apollon was unexpected. I thought Daphne would open her robe or let Apollon see her fucking Lucy. A cum shot to the face was perfect.

(I still have issues with Apollon's fractured English, but he is so deliciously sleazy, I decided it is part of who he is.)

Looking forward to more.

 

[GrushaVashnadze]

Labeltornoff, thanks so much! Glad you enjoyed it.
Yes, it is effectively the same story told from two different points of view/characters. You're clearly a Lucy sort of person; I'm probably more of a Daphne...
I do like accents and dialects, I'm afraid. I know it's not fashionable these days, but for me it brings characters alive. Especially for comic effect.
Not sure there'll be more of these characters very soon. Must make sure I'm not just telling the same story over and over again...
But there'll be other different stories. Hopefully you'll like them too.
Thanks so much for your encouragement!

 

[GrushaVashnadze]

I just wanted to let you all know that I have completed my Metamorphoses series - about the time-travelling opera-singing futanari Daphne and her lesbian beloved Lucy. Some of you were so kind and helpful when I brought out chapters 1 & 2, I thought you might be interested in Chapter 3, which is now up on Lit.

Chapter 4 (the final one) to follow shortly.

All the best,
Grusha

 

[GrushaVashnadze]

Chapter 4 is now up - and so this series, Metamorphoses, is now at last complete!

Chapters 1 and 2 are scored "hot", and elicited comments like:
"a stunning, entrancing, captivating journey...The pacing was perfect. The sex was phenomenal." (Violet_Vixen)
"For uniqueness and creativity alone it's earned 5 stars from me" (yukonnights)
"The story and the writing are compelling and arousing" (labeltornoff)

I hope you all enjoy chapters 3 and 4 as much!

 

[GrushaVashnadze]

Interestingly enough, while chapters 1, 2 and 4 of this story have scored very well on Literotica (i.e. "hot" or nearly there), chapter 3 has not. I am wondering whether it might be to do with the category I put it in (Sci-Fi & Fantasy). So I am taking a punt and moving it to Transgender & Crossdressers, to see if it makes any difference.

I am not that experienced in the ways of Literotica. And it is genuinely difficult to know where to put a story about an opera-singing time-travelling futanari! Does anyone have any advice for me?