New Episode - "Interruptus4"

[JUDO]

Normally, I would post this notice with a link to the story, but alas, it is not posted as of this morning.

I am going out-of-town for a few days and will not be able to put this up when the posting happens (plane leaves EARLY tomorrow).

I posted my first three stories at Literotica with very little knowledge of what I should do with regards to dialog, form, etc. I received a lot of feedback with regards to the resulting confusion.

My newest, "Interruptus4" is an attempt on my part to address the notes I recieved here and by email. Writing this one was not as spontaneous and as a result, some parts of the story's rhythm feels a little odd to me. And the process took much longer than the other ones.

If you get the chance, please take a gander and let me know what issues I need to concentrate on.

Thanks everyone! Hope you like it!

And a *wink wink* to my Annette...

- Judo

PS - Oh, and if someone will link the story here as soon as it gets posted, I'd really appreciate it.

 

[Mindy2]

Judo,

Haven't had time to read this yet, but I will, and I'll e-mail you. In the meantime, per your request. Here's the link to your story. Hope I'm doing this correctly.

... Mindy

LINK TO: Interruptus4 by Judo...


http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=16488

 

[JUDO]

Thanks!

Mindy2,

Thanks! You're a doll! Just got back in town and off to check email.

- Judo