New Direction

[zombie22]

My new submission, "Storm Story", is out and looking forward to constructive feedback. One of the public comments submitted actually angered me a little. If he wants to read a story with content that specific, how come he/she didn't write one. I am trying to increase my output and experiment with new genres and styles but want real criticism. Help!


Zombie22

 

[violent intimacy]

Zombie,

1. It would be helpful if you included a link either to your page or directly to the story, so that people interested in helping you don't have to go looking for it.

Link -- Storm Story

2. That was a ridiculous comment. I understand that it may be difficult as an author to ignore things being said about one's writing, and certainly, readers are entitled to their opinions, but that was truly a useless comment if I ever saw one. My advice is to ignore it completely.

-Sami

 

[zombie22]

Thanks

Thanks for the feedback. I will make sure and link the story next time. I did take that one comment with a grain of salt, it looked like that guy was typing with his thumbs. I'm really wanting to improve my description and charachter development. This story was kind of a quick one off attempt to write something hot without setting up a multi story plot line. Thanks again.

Zombie22