Couture
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This week I am posting 2 stories. The second part of The Haunting of Heather and Taming the Teach (aka Teen Trollops Trick Timid Teacher!)
The Haunting of Heather story is kind of curious. The first chapter had a rating of a 2! Well with all the work I put into it, I can tell you I was PISSED! Readers, I know you don't want to hear me pissing and moaning (well maybe some of you do ;-), but when you read the first chapter of a series, please be gentle. Series start off a little slow, suspense doesn't work properly if done backwards. If the spelling, grammer, and plot make you want to read the next chapter to see what happens to the main character, then I have done my job. It's like foreplay, good things cum to those who wait. After getting slammed on the introduction, the characters stopped talking to me and chapter 3 was never finished. I hope to be able to finish it, but the trail has grown cold.
Anyway, the two stories have been posted. I've supplied the whine . . . enjoy!
The Haunting of Heather story is kind of curious. The first chapter had a rating of a 2! Well with all the work I put into it, I can tell you I was PISSED! Readers, I know you don't want to hear me pissing and moaning (well maybe some of you do ;-), but when you read the first chapter of a series, please be gentle. Series start off a little slow, suspense doesn't work properly if done backwards. If the spelling, grammer, and plot make you want to read the next chapter to see what happens to the main character, then I have done my job. It's like foreplay, good things cum to those who wait. After getting slammed on the introduction, the characters stopped talking to me and chapter 3 was never finished. I hope to be able to finish it, but the trail has grown cold.
Anyway, the two stories have been posted. I've supplied the whine . . . enjoy!
