New Ch. for your reading pleasure

[EveHasFallen]

Hi,

The 4th chapter in my story was approved this weekend and, while I've been receiving positive feedback, I kind of feel like it's going flat. Anyone interested in reading it and offering some comments would be greatly appreciated!

I'll post the link to the 4th chapter, although it might be beneficial to read the first three to see how the characters evolve (or don't)...should be easy enough to hit the other ones from here.

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=203347




Thanks,

Eve