New Author

[MagicaPractica]

Welcome aboard!

 

[Big_Vermont_Beauty]

Approved first time around

Hey everyone! My story was approved. I hope you enjoy it.

https://www.literotica.com/s/leguerres-folly-ch-01

 

[NOIRTRASH]

Your writing is better than many, but your tale put me to sleep. Did Hillary help you?

 

[Big_Vermont_Beauty]

Your writing is better than many, but your tale put me to sleep. Did Hillary help you?

Wow! quite the backhanded compliment. It's a good thing I have a thicker skin than that. Did you have any constructive criticism, or just criticism?

 

[sr71plt]

NOIRTRASH is our resident "avert your eyes, and move along quickly" poster.

 

[NOIRTRASH]

Wow! quite the backhanded compliment. It's a good thing I have a thicker skin than that. Did you have any constructive criticism, or just criticism?

Looks like you got tender fragile hide, too. No problem, plenty will come along to kiss it.

 

[TxRad]

NOIRTRASH aka JBJ is our pet troll. Not that we wanted a pet troll but it seems like we're struck with him. Just nod politely and ignore him. He likes to be hit with a rolled up newspaper so that is out.

 

[Big_Vermont_Beauty]

NOIRTRASH aka JBJ is our pet troll. Not that we wanted a pet troll but it seems like we're struck with him. Just nod politely and ignore him. He likes to be hit with a rolled up newspaper so that is out.

I see!

Thank you!

 

[NOIRTRASH]

I see!

Thank you!

TEX is gonna lure you into war with me, and I always win wars.
If you don't want feedback don't ask for it.

 

[sr71plt]

Point of order. She asked folks to enjoy the story, not to critique it. Not that you have the credentials to be critiquing erotica, since you don't really write any erotica yourself and don't seem to be aware of what it is.