New author, need help editing my first submission

[Bayoububba]

I need someone to edit my first attempt at this type of story writing. Any help would be greatly appreciated. Thanks

 

[LadyCibelle]

I need someone to edit my first attempt at this type of story writing. Any help would be greatly appreciated. Thanks

Hi Bub,

My editing plate is full at the moment but I wanted to welcome you to the EF. I'm sure one of our great editors will take you on and will give you the help you need.

Good luck.

 

[Bayoububba]

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Thanks cibelle

 

[Bayoububba]

Femdom Malesub story, 6 chapters need editor/ critique before posting

Help! I've been out of school quite a while and need help with structure and punctuation. I would also like some constructive criticism on my story. I don't want to make a fool of myself, because this is my first submission. Any help would be very much appreciated.

 

[CopyCarver]

Help! I've been out of school quite a while and need help with structure and punctuation. I would also like some constructive criticism on my story. I don't want to make a fool of myself, because this is my first submission. Any help would be very much appreciated.

Like Lady C, I'm neck deep in manuscripts at the moment. I'll bet someone will step up when more people check in later in the day.

 

[Bayoububba]

Anyone willing to read over

Anyone willing to read over or edit this series( so far, six chapters) or possibly write another chapter can e-mail me. Check profile

 

[RogueLurker]

Anyone willing to read over or edit this series( so far, six chapters) or possibly write another chapter can e-mail me. Check profile

Six chapters?!?!? I thought you said you were just starting. You're email and PM options aren't activated. You can activate them through the User Control Panel.

 

[WhiteWave48]

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[Bayoububba]

Editing.

Thanks, I will send you a P.M.

 

[WhiteWave48]

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