new author here. would like feedback.

[rollingrock8990]

Hello everyone. My name is Kyle and im 23 years old. I recently posted a story with about 5 chapters in it so far and would like y'all to check it out. I wrote all 5 chapters on my phone and did the best i could with sentence form, punctuation and spelling. I admit i got antsy at the end and it got a little sloppy.

Anyways, the story is called Adams genie. I intend for it to be about 20 chapters long. It seems the chapters are getting longer as i write it. I have a pretty good phone with a large screen and a great writing app to use. But it has no way to check for spelling n such. In the future ill try n find an editor.

When the story is approved and posted plz read it and send me some good comments and emails k? Oh BTW ill get online from my laptop when i get Wifi turned on

 

[sr71plt]

The "Story Feedback" forum is where you get response on wanting feedback. And folks here are a bit lazy. Wait until the story is up and post a link to it--in the "Story Feedback" section.

 

[TE999]

Here's the link for the Story Discussion Circle. There's where you'll get feedback. Good luck. http://forum.literotica.com/forumdisplay.php?f=14

 

[MSTarot]

okay...

You sound like your juggling a lot of things in the air at the moment while out of breath and riding a unicycle.

Take it slow. We all understand that antsy feeling when you have a story to post. It's not your friend.

My first story here has done rather well in the last near year, but when I go back and look over it now I want to cringe. I will at some point sit down and do an edit on it, and repost it. Along with a few others in my lists.

There is no rush and the time you take now will help you get those good comments that will make your day.

As opposed to the ones that will make you want to throw that phone across a lake just to see how many times it will skip.

Welcome to the site from someone who just got here himself.

Now if i can just take my own advice.

M.S.Tarot

 

[rollingrock8990]

This is all helpful advise. Thanks. Didn't see the feedback section but now i do. I suppose im just anxious LOL.