never wrote one before, needs some work
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There are a few major flaws that make this almost unreadable. I'm not saying I am some kind of literary genius, but there are some very basic rules that must be adhered to. The content is ok, what kind of help are you looking for?
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I'm trying to fight the urge to edit the stuffing out of this attempt.This is the golden question, that we need an answer to, before we can move on.
I do like the general premise (even though its not very clear) but my interpretation of the premise is kind of awesome.
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Perhaps Story Ideas will help this member, then. Usually, several people come together and offer their "little bit extra" to a story. Sometimes more than one author will even write and sumbit their take of that original idea. Only good can come from an idea!
Usually, several people come together and offer their "little bit extra" to a story. Sometimes more than one author will even write and sumbit their take of that original idea. Only good can come from an idea!8teenholes
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I'm not that interested in wasting my time, maybe if I were asked. I would never be so presumptuous.
