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[Mayu]

I have been thinking of what to write for the first time, a nice detailed long story so was wondering what kinds of stories do you like to hear about? I would love to do a story that hasn't been done to death, been thinking of a fantasy one, where a woman that is very powerful tries to get people on her side and those who don't with just a thought of her mind they start to burn from the inside out.

 

[destinie21]

I have been thinking of what to write for the first time, a nice detailed long story so was wondering what kinds of stories do you like to hear about? I would love to do a story that hasn't been done to death, been thinking of a fantasy one, where a woman that is very powerful tries to get people on her side and those who don't with just a thought of her mind they start to burn from the inside out.

check out the thread on this forum called SHE I think it might be a cool idea
for your first story.

 

[crookedpen]

your firrst story

Write about a fantasy, that helps. Give details about tyhe sex parts, but don't drag on the story. Don't worry about it being too short. Most of all have fun with it.