Needed: Story Editor

[Fantasy_Inscriber]

Hi,
I am looking for some who can edit a story for me. Its my first attempt at this.
I have posted the story but it needs some editing.

You can check it
Tnasexual section: The pretty girl was much more

Any help is appreciated

Thanks

 

[NaokoSmith]

You can sometimes pick up an editor in here - if that's what tickles your fancy . However do post in the Editor's Forum too:
http://forum.literotica.com/forumdisplay.php?f=9

 

[Tigersman]

Volunteer editor

Are you still looking for an editor? If so send me a private message and it will reply asap.