need your suggestions

[secretslut_daisy]

please ignore this

please ignore this

 

[ElectricBlue]

If you have multiple characters under twelve, it's most unlikely you'll get the story published here. This site is for 18+ erotica. You probably should find a more appropriate site for social history as you're describing it - it's the wrong audience, I think.

 

[AlphaLyon]

There is no story here, judging by what you have provided; only the roughest of details.
It sounds like you need a co-writer, not an editor, as you don't even have a manuscript for them to edit.
I would advise posting this in the Authors' Hangout instead, although I don't know how much interest you will have. You might want to try a non-erotic site to find non-erotic co-writers for your non-erotic story.