Need your advice on my story.

[MightyZor]

I just wrote a story about a male teacher and female student doing it. If I submit it to literotica it will take to long o finall publish, I was wondering if any of you could read it first.
Should I just paste it here? If it's ok with you I will paste it.

 

[Un-registered]

That is precisely why there is a volunteer editor programme. Check it out.

 

[Monazwx]

You may also want to check out the "Story Discussion Circle"
(But I think that's for after the story is posted).

Here's the link to the Volunteer Editors (from which you select one):

http://www.literotica.com/storyxs/voled_stor.shtml