need some new threads

[coleman]

hi all, i have a daughter in law story and i need some writters to add a thred or two to get my story going. Could someone please help me. Its about a father in law how is trying to get in bed with his unwilling daughter in law.
Please help me. the link is below

http://www.chyoo.com/dx/?dx=c&story_id=819

 

[jakelyon]

Tough One

This is an interesting story, but a challenging one. It is going to be hard to write as Frank is pretty damn repulsive, and his Daughter in Law is so not right for him. Have to think a while on the right angle to take to hit it.

How do you feel about:

Son has been neglecting her so she is really horny, Frank catches her masturbating, and she needs a man any man and Frank is there.

Frank goes out to a bar and scores and brings home a nice woman to fuck. Daughter in Law hears them going at it and wants to join in.

Frank goes for pity angle with her telling her how long it has been since he has been with a woman. She agrees to help him out.

Frank gets her really drunk and takes advantage while he has the chance.

Let me know if any of these sound good and I'll work on it.

Thanks.

 

[Guest]

i think the third idear is good because frank can have the chance to trick his DIL into bed.