Need opinions on my story

[DG Hear]

Hi Ya'll: I'm DG Hear and I never tried this before. Here is a new story I've posted today. I would like other authors to read it and give me thier honest feedback, either here or the comment page, or drop me a not. It is in erotic coupling Please don't let that stop you from reading it. You never know where my stories are liable to go. Thank you in advance for your comments.
DG Hear

here's the erl to the story (I hope) Not much good with this pasting stuff.
"Life Goes On, Another Story"
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=297995

 

[DG Hear]

comments?

The comments are coming in on the story. Some love, some hate. I figured that this would happen, it always does with my stories. It's why I want opinion from authors who aren't afraid to tell the truth. I'm told the stories are to long and others say to short. I have broad shoulders and if it sucked that's fine. At least I'll here the truth. Well, thanks anyway. Next wk I have a incest/taboo one coming out. Probably get some weird feedback then to.
DG

 

[starrkers]

I just called it up, but it's too long for me to read right now. I solemnly promise I will return and read it when time permits.