Need ideas for details in story I am writing...

[racerXXXXXX]

Hello, I'm looking for some ideas for a specific part of a story I am writing. Here is a synopsis of the story so far...

Business owner is being blackmailed by an arrogant young male employee who wants to fuck the business owners wife.

The young employee tells the business owner and his wife to go to a hotel room on a specific day/time and get ready for him to arrive and fuck the wife while husband watches. He then shows up with three other guys intending to gang bang the business owners wife. He makes her drink alcohol but spikes her drink with extacy to make her more cooperative.

The arrogant young man makes a game out of it (called four on the whore) where each guy rolls a die and the highest number wins and gets to tell the whore whatever he wants her to do.

This is where I need ideas about what they tell her to do...I can use the garden variety gang bang scenes but I'd like some different twists and turns.

Thank you!

 

[DocCIS]

The biggest hurdle for most blackmailing stories is the blackmail itself. Why is the wife agreeing to it? What are the consequences of NOT complying. For me, the set-up is just as important, if not more so, than the actual sexual acts. How would a young employee have enough leverage to get a man and his wife to agree for her to be his plaything for a night, a day, a week, or however long...

Once having a believable reason, start off slow--maybe having the business owner getting his wife to dress slutty in public at company outings and whatnot, then moving towards her spending more time with other men at a bar instead of her husband, and then finally ending with the gangbang or group scene so it builds up better.

Just my 0.02!

 

[MatthewVett]

The biggest hurdle for most blackmailing stories is the blackmail itself. Why is the wife agreeing to it? What are the consequences of NOT complying. For me, the set-up is just as important, if not more so, than the actual sexual acts. How would a young employee have enough leverage to get a man and his wife to agree for her to be his plaything for a night, a day, a week, or however long...

Once having a believable reason, start off slow--maybe having the business owner getting his wife to dress slutty in public at company outings and whatnot, then moving towards her spending more time with other men at a bar instead of her husband, and then finally ending with the gangbang or group scene so it builds up better.

Just my 0.02!

I'm with you. Most blackmail stories I see, the blackmail material isn't as bad as what they're being blackmailed into. For this type of story, though, I'd suggest financial indiscretions. The husband's been doing money laundering or tax evasion, and the young employee is an accountant. If he goes to the IRS, the husband's going to jail for a long, long time. That'd probably be feasible for this scenario.

 

[Tmmldr]

very good suggestions.

I'd also look at developing one of the characters' personalities in depth. Maybe the blackmailer. Is he a nerdy obsessive introvert? Does he hate the business owner with a passion? Maybe he's never fucked a woman except his mother.

In other words, what is he? Is he a sick twisted fuck? A pure evil antagonist? Maybe an ordinary guy that one day, in an impossible situation, said "Enough!"

Maybe the business owner's been forcing him to do stuff. Criminal stuff, lying on the tax reporting. But he's honest and it bothered him. Maybe his scheme includes a way out for him personally. He knows it's just a matter of time before the IRS closes in, and he wants to skate.

Maybe the blackmail comes in after the IRS begins the investigation, and he's found he could talk with the agent. The agent that drove up in a first class Mercedes and who sports a ten thousand dollar Rolex.

But for the agent to let him off takes a bit more. A bit of that hot wife....maybe more than a bit....the agent knows he can get all he wants from the accountant.

This could go all kinds of ways from here, including the accountant having to do some cock sucking, supply his 18 year old daughters or those of the boss, anything. I definitely see the boss having to bend over and take it at some point.

And of course, the IRS agent has to be the real bad guy, and wind up getting his in the end.

 

[crablouse]

throwing in my two cents--

the blackmailer should video-record the affair for additional leverage. if the businessman ever tries to take action short of going to the police, he can threaten to send the degrading video to the victim's friends/family.

 

[racerXXXXXX]

Boy, you guys are good, you nailed the exact way the business owner is being blackmailed.

The young employee is an accounting major in college and has found out the business owner is cheating the government and the business owner asks how much he wants and he says I don't want money I want that...pointing at a picture of the wife on his desk.

The business owner then goes home and tells the wife and she is furious and says that he can rot in prison for all she cares she is not fucking that snot-nosed kid. Later she come to her senses when she realizes she is signed on these documents for the business and agrees to fuck him to save herself and her husband...

But what about the kinky twisted things they make her do???

Thanks!

 

[HeyAll]

For the blackmail, how about this:

- The young employee is a real piece of shit. He's an incredibly smart guy, but he was fired for doing shady things. Emphasis on him being very smart. Perhaps he was embezzling money. They fired him and he didn't like it. Perhaps before he left, he did things with their paperwork to make it look like they were cheating on taxes or whatever. The blackmailers explains to the couple the consequences, which is years in prison, and they're terrified out of their minds.


As for what they make her do:

- Public sex is also fun. Perhaps one guy fucks her by the window. The next guy wants to raise the stakes and do her out by the pool when no one was around. The husband is angry, but the wife is looser because of the drugs.

- How about double penetration? And a cock in her mouth of course.

- How about they make her take pictures of her pussy or ass getting fucked and emal it to their friends (meaning the pictures get sent to the friends of the blackmailers who have no idea who the woman is)

- Perhaps for the finale, after the gang bang, they're ordered to go back to work. (Perhaps the gangbang was early in the morning). That means the wife has to go to work and deal with customers all day with cum inside of her body and so forth.

Perhaps the blackmailer gets his job back and he grins watching her work. That could be the ending.

 

[sassysasha89]

For the blackmail, how about this:

- The young employee is a real piece of shit. He's an incredibly smart guy, but he was fired for doing shady things. Emphasis on him being very smart. Perhaps he was embezzling money. They fired him and he didn't like it. Perhaps before he left, he did things with their paperwork to make it look like they were cheating on taxes or whatever. The blackmailers explains to the couple the consequences, which is years in prison, and they're terrified out of their minds.


As for what they make her do:

- Public sex is also fun. Perhaps one guy fucks her by the window. The next guy wants to raise the stakes and do her out by the pool when no one was around. The husband is angry, but the wife is looser because of the drugs.

- How about double penetration? And a cock in her mouth of course.

- How about they make her take pictures of her pussy or ass getting fucked and emal it to their friends (meaning the pictures get sent to the friends of the blackmailers who have no idea who the woman is)

- Perhaps for the finale, after the gang bang, they're ordered to go back to work. (Perhaps the gangbang was early in the morning). That means the wife has to go to work and deal with customers all day with cum inside of her body and so forth.

Perhaps the blackmailer gets his job back and he grins watching her work. That could be the ending.

My two cents for kinky:

- The gang bang is done in the morning but at work.

- Not just pictures but a video sent in mass mail to family, friends and co-workers under a made up account. Of course her face was hidden and her voice was remarkably different under the influence sex and drugs.

- He purposely impregnates her as a daily reminder to the husband that other men had his wife. Husband is forced to watch his pregnant wife ride the accountant's cock in their own bedroom.

- One or two of the guys fucks her in the parking lot. Another does her in shower stalls of the company's gym after another fucks in the gym room.

- A mix of public sex & dominance : Accountant exhibits his power over her when he fucks her during lunch out with family or close friends in the restaurant bathroom or janitor's closet. He shows up at her son's football/basketball game and does her underneath the bleachers. Their youngest daughter has a playdate and the blackmailer shows up (either alone or with one or two men) and the husband is forced to entertain the kids while the wife is upstairs entertaining them.

- How he has her and/or them taken back to his apartment or rented motel room for one on one fucking or some serious gang banging with four or five cocks at least.

The blackmailer not only gets his job back but a promotion. Perhaps a promotion of choosing and he picks one that puts him in close proximity of the wife.

 

[HeyAll]

Nice ideas.

Perhaps the husband & wife own a somewhat prestigious company where they regularly have to deal with clients. ie small law firm, manufacture medical supplies, ect...