Stalliond1377
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Open to ideas
Need idea for the 3rd part of my story "Unfaithful Indian Girlfriend"
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CuttingEdge
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We might need a little more than six combined words in order to help you out.
Stalliond1377
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So you are asking us to read your stories and suggest where to take the story now. That's not really what we do here, friend. On these forums, we come up with an idea, we post it, and then we sort of bat it around for a while, seeing what avenues the writer might take.
So to put it plainly, there is some effort required on your part. We don't ask any more from the group than to read a couple of paragraphs.
So you need to come up with a quick synopsis and come up with an idea of where to take it next, and then we add our thoughts.
So to put it plainly, there is some effort required on your part. We don't ask any more from the group than to read a couple of paragraphs.
So you need to come up with a quick synopsis and come up with an idea of where to take it next, and then we add our thoughts.
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An Indian, named Little Crow, finds out his squaw has been having heap-big affairs with other braves in the tribe, and that his papoose probably isn't even his. He suspects that Laughing Horse, a big strapping warrior, is the interloper. He lures Laughing Horse out into the desert, where he means to kill him. But LH tricks him into smoking peace-pipe with him, and they become best of friends. Little Crow tells LH that he can keep the squaw, and the papoose, as he has decided to come out as trans and let LH be the bull for both of them. And they all lived HEA.
BrightShinyGirl
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Ananya ditches both those creeps and runs off to Paris with Chloe, a wealthy investment banker. They get married after a whirlwind romance and are deliriously happy together.
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I am so dense sometimes, I guess because being of American Indian heritage, when I read "Indian" now I think "Indian" as a lady is from India and not American Indian.
In any case, this reminds me of the 1990's when there was a whole American Indian Romance Genre where novel after novel was written of a white woman kidnapped off the range of some cowboy by Indian's, force into living with the Indian's for a time, and ultimately falling in love with the Indian man that kidnapped her. Every darn novel was the same, but my ex-wife read 100's of them just the same.
In any case, this reminds me of the 1990's when there was a whole American Indian Romance Genre where novel after novel was written of a white woman kidnapped off the range of some cowboy by Indian's, force into living with the Indian's for a time, and ultimately falling in love with the Indian man that kidnapped her. Every darn novel was the same, but my ex-wife read 100's of them just the same.
