Need help

[williepeter]

50 stories in and still need help. The biggest criticism I get is stories are more like outlines. Looking for someone to help me flesh out stories.

https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=5942888&page=submissions

 

[yukonnights]

I took a look at a few of your stories. Yes, they are too brief. I think one thing that would help you more than dry technical advice here is; Put the pen down for awhile and read how more experienced authors craft a story. (However, you are writing for your own pleasure — so perhaps you don't really want to change what you're currently doing. There's nothing wrong with that.)

There are two main types of stories here; 1. The short ones known as "strokers" e.g jack-off fodder. There's nothing wrong with short so long as they pass the believability test. Some of what I read of yours didn't read as believable. If it's not believable, it's really hard to "buy into" the story — even if it is just a stroker scene.

2. The developed stories. These can have pages of buildup which lead to the hinted at relationship. These stories tell a more real to life progression of how people become attracted to someone, how the often hit & miss friendship/relationship develops into something more, a crisis point where doubt or conflict threatens the relationship, a resolution to the crisis which then brings things back to a more hopeful conclusion.

Another good way to learn more is the internet. There are innumerable "How To" pages where folks share their writing tips for no cost. In the end, I think the believability part is what you need to focus on. But kudos for having the passion to turn out so many stories.

As to someone helping you do all of this, IMO you'll just get one person's opinion on how you should write. I think you'd be better off honing your own style. Hope this helps you do that.