Need help

[Cantpar]

Need help with below
Story about my wife and I when we were 18 some flashing by her and a bit of dirty talk. Have more stories but need help. Story is 1082 words.
Let me know if you can help

1. Please break up your dialogue. The convention is one speaker per paragraph, so whenever someone new says something, start a new a paragraph. The essay "How to Make Characters Talk" in our Writer's Resources section has more information on the paragraph formatting of dialogue if you have further questions. 2. Please fix the punctuation of your dialogue. The convention is that you include periods, commas, exclamation points, or question marks inside the quotes. The essay "How to Make Characters Talk" in our Writer's Resources section has more information on the formatting of dialogue if you have further questions.
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[Beneaththesurface]

I highly recommend reading the article in your post as to how to write dialogue (the speaking parts) of your story. Also, take the time to do some reading of the stories here and take note of how the dialogue is being written. I sent you a pm.

 

[Cantpar]

Thanks

Thanks for the tip I think I may have it now. I’ve resubmitted it, will let ya know