Need help with story

[MrHappy212]

Fair warning the story involves mom & son sex that is not all love and flowers. Chapter one was just posted and already I've gotten a comment that has brought up questions. I need someone to read through it and tell me if certain scenes are over the top -too much- or not enough.

https://www.literotica.com/s/christmas-and-mom-ch-01


the scenes in question are the kitchen blow job (pg2) and the sex scene at the end of pg 3.