need help guys - please ASAP mfm

[jeninflorida]

so, when you read a mfm story, are you comfortable with a situation where the wife goes down on the lover and when the lovers reaches his climax she kisses the other man?

is that okay or is that a taboo?

I'm getting a ton of request on this subject but I wasn't sure if that was a no-no

 

[Ldy_Sea]

Here we go

Lots of guys love to see a girl who blow them drool their cum into another girls mouth. I personally find that disgusting and look away when it happens.

When it comes to sex there is something out there for everyone and no one sexual desires will ever overlap another persons completely.

If in the context of the story it feels right then write it in. If not leave it out. It is your story with your name on it so you have to be happy with it. I have written about things I would not do irl and even some things that are turn offs for me, like watersports. In the context of the story it had to happen based on how the characters interact but not someething I want to do or have done.

With that said, some people enjoy having a guy share a cum kiss after being blown others won't. Since you can't please everyone, please yourself.

 

[1sickbastard]

so, when you read a mfm story, are you comfortable with a situation where the wife goes down on the lover and when the lovers reaches his climax she kisses the other man?

is that okay or is that a taboo?

I'm getting a ton of request on this subject but I wasn't sure if that was a no-no

Taboo is relative.
On this site only two things are forbidden-sex scenes with under age characters and beastiality.

SeaUrchin is right-on. Write the story as you want and as it needs to be written.
Don't sweat the critics or the haters.

 

[jeninflorida]

Taboo is relative.
On this site only two things are forbidden-sex scenes with under age characters and beastiality.

SeaUrchin is right-on. Write the story as you want and as it needs to be written.
Don't sweat the critics or the haters.

I never let the haters bug me, that's why I have 40 stories here on literotica! hope to post another 20 this year...but its time to go home and bed...long week

 

[okatty35]

so, when you read a mfm story, are you comfortable with a situation where the wife goes down on the lover and when the lovers reaches his climax she kisses the other man?

is that okay or is that a taboo?

I'm getting a ton of request on this subject but I wasn't sure if that was a no-no

Dont see that as taboo at all....sounds hot and in that moment anything would go!

 

[greenjacobin]

so, when you read a mfm story, are you comfortable with a situation where the wife goes down on the lover and when the lovers reaches his climax she kisses the other man?

is that okay or is that a taboo?

I'm getting a ton of request on this subject but I wasn't sure if that was a no-no

Good grief. That's an average day for me.

 

[LindsayRae]

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[HeyAll]

I wouldn't mind reading that, but if you put it in the Loving Wives section, prepare to be grilled because they don't like that sort of stuff.

 

[Pittdude1972]

Dont see that as taboo at all....sounds hot and in that moment anything would go!

I agree. They could discuss it afterwards and determine that they both found it very hot. Its really up to how you want to portray the couple and the MMF situation as the writer. The story itself will find its own audience.

 

[jeninflorida]

Dont see that as taboo at all....sounds hot and in that moment anything would go!

ah well ask any girl and she has a story or two to tell you....some guys get all strange after we give them a blow job....they pull out a tooth brush and won't kiss you till you....

so that is why I had to ask

I don't think guys want to make out with other guys. I do think that there is a metro base out there and that "Hollywood"/media is pushing the idea that its sexy to watch two men kiss....I do think that 90% of men love the fantasy of a hotwife/swapping

 

[subwannabe]

I agree with write what you want to write. From what I have seen there are plenty here that that would be a huge turn on for and of course others quite the opposite. No one is ever going to write a story that everyone loves. I have written a lot of stories but have never posted one here on LIT. It just seems too political here and if I dare say so, I think the authors as a whole are waaaay to serious about themselves. I'm also surprised by the fact that editors are used and then I see several final products which have gone through editors which have glaring grade school mistakes. Having said that, I do like to read stories here. There are tons and tons of good quality product.

 

[DarianBlack]

so, when you read a mfm story, are you comfortable with a situation where the wife goes down on the lover and when the lovers reaches his climax she kisses the other man?

is that okay or is that a taboo?

I'm getting a ton of request on this subject but I wasn't sure if that was a no-no

I believe that if you were to gather up and make everyone on Lit vote about the subject what you would get is this:

The Men will generally find this hot.
The Women will almost always find this hot.

That is all.

 

[hulvamulva]

Ditto what Seaurchin said. For me it's all about the context. In some stories I find it hot, and some not. Write it your way.

 

[jasper3738]

mfm

I always thought that at the point of climax the wife is looking into her husbands sure as her womb is filled with another man's seed

 

[silvastormcloud]

The real question is what would the characters think?

 

[sirhugs]

so, when you read a mfm story, are you comfortable with a situation where the wife goes down on the lover and when the lovers reaches his climax she kisses the other man?

is that okay or is that a taboo?

I'm getting a ton of request on this subject but I wasn't sure if that was a no-no

depends upon the reader - some of us will not care, some will be excited, a few might flame you...

go for it, I say

 

[jeninflorida]

The real question is what would the characters think?

well I just submitted a couple of mfm stories and 1 BDSM story to a publisher....we shall see.

I have no problem with it, but for a story to post on literotica....well I wanted to get some feedback. I gear my stories a little, as to what I think a reader would want.

I'm shocked by the number of request of bi male erotica filling up my email

 

[Texguy84]

I think the authors as a whole are waaaay to serious about themselves.

Why, I say, I take myself seriously because I AM SERIOUS BUSINESS. I'll have you know that I have DOZENS of readers who read my very high quality stories which I published online.

Or, possibly, one or two readers who just read my stuff a lot. I'm not sure if the counter distinguishes between repeats or unique hits.

 

[jeninflorida]

depends upon the reader - some of us will not care, some will be excited, a few might flame you...

go for it, I say

LW story....well that brings out all the nuts! hehe

 

[goldenpalomino]

I wouldn't mind if she kissed the other man as I was cumming, just as long as there was some reason for it, like he had his cock in her, she was cumming on his cock, he was cumming in her, he was fucking her, it was the first time he touched her, etc..

Also, I'd be fine with it if she was stroking or holding my spurting cock as she kissed him, if I was cumming on her, etc..

so, when you read a mfm story, are you comfortable with a situation where the wife goes down on the lover and when the lovers reaches his climax she kisses the other man?

is that okay or is that a taboo?

I'm getting a ton of request on this subject but I wasn't sure if that was a no-no

 

[TallBobAgainSomewhere]

It is all good

Don't see why that would be a problem at all for someone who agreed to a mfm in the first place.

 

[Sean Renaud]

I had to read that like eighty times to figure out what was being talked about. I thought at first it was snowballing. If you're talking about snowballing by gods put it in the Fetish catagory. If you just mean kissing after blow job then yeah that's pretty run of the mill and not even worthy of asking permission.

 

[Black13]

There is an entire section of this site devoted to stories of incest, and it's pretty full of stories. How are you possibly concerned with taboo? This site exists so that people can get what's inside out of them without committing something they feel socially (or even personally) deplorable. If you want to rape a man with a ginsu knife in your story, go for it. You're in the Dark Lord's Realm, so don't get coy

 

[steelrfn]

The idea squiks me out a bit.

Then again I have no desire to participate in a MFM threesome either, so guess I wouldn't be the target audience.

I would assume that those persons who request bi male scenes would be expecting even more male on male contact, however, so that would hardly be a sticking point for them.