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Meadowshadow
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Hey,
I have written 5 chapters for a story which centres around sex fighting, submission, and reluctance.*
I was happy with the first 4 chapters, but I got a bit of negative feedback from chapter 5.
I am now ready to bring this series to an end and focus on other stories, but I dont want it to go out with a whimper. I have an idea of how I would like to proceed with chapter 6, but I would really appreciate some feedback and suggestions from anybody willing to discuss this with me.
https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=5020245&page=submissions
I have written 5 chapters for a story which centres around sex fighting, submission, and reluctance.*
I was happy with the first 4 chapters, but I got a bit of negative feedback from chapter 5.
I am now ready to bring this series to an end and focus on other stories, but I dont want it to go out with a whimper. I have an idea of how I would like to proceed with chapter 6, but I would really appreciate some feedback and suggestions from anybody willing to discuss this with me.
https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=5020245&page=submissions
