drunkwombat
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I'm asking because I'm too close to the story and I don't have a good sense of what people might find difficult to read. (I want to err on the side of caution of course).
Toward the end of the story two characters, who are friends, have spontaneous sex after they both lose the loves of their lives. They do it to mask their pain, in one case punish themself and the other to vicariously strike back at the lost love. The sex is not described but their thoughts and feelings in the moment are. Both immediately regret what they've done deeply. To me it's a very strong emotional scene but like I said I'm too close.
Any advice is appreciated and I'm more than happy to send a copy of the story.
Thanks!
Toward the end of the story two characters, who are friends, have spontaneous sex after they both lose the loves of their lives. They do it to mask their pain, in one case punish themself and the other to vicariously strike back at the lost love. The sex is not described but their thoughts and feelings in the moment are. Both immediately regret what they've done deeply. To me it's a very strong emotional scene but like I said I'm too close.
Any advice is appreciated and I'm more than happy to send a copy of the story.
Thanks!