Need editor... well more of an opinion really

[LilaBlossom]

I have already several stories posted on the site but I haven't posted anything new for like a year so I am a little rusty. I have a new story about halfway done but I am not sure if I should post it at all. I guess what I really need is for someone to tell me if the story is any good.

If anyone is interested in reading it the story is about an orphaned princess who, under royal tradition, must chose a husband on her 21st birthday but instead she falls for the current king, a distant cousin. It's a little scifi, a little incest (although it could change and they are cousins several times removed), a little romance, and a fair amount of sex.

If one or two of you are kind enough to take a look I will send you several chapters. I welcome any editorial suggestions as well.

Thanks,
LilaBlossom

 

[Dragonstaff]

I would be willing to have look at it for you. It is not a genre that I have read much of, but something new would make a change.

 

[amber03]

I'd be happy to take a look at it for you, to offer opinion

amber x