Need Editor: Non-Con/Humiliation story.

[Lalah]

I just finished my first story. It's a story about a fear I've had before.

It's happening in a College Gym. It's humiliation and non-consent. To me it's mostly about the humiliation. It has anal, some watersports, maybe a little BDSM depending on how you look at it. All there mostly in the goal of creating more humiliation, but it can stand on it's own if that's your thing. I don't know if it will pass Literotica's acceptance test, but it has no obvious no-no.

I'm pretty familiar with the English language but it's not my primary one, so there's bound to be some mistakes you'll spot and I didn't. Comments and suggestions are welcome, but I think it's pretty decent for a first time.

So, anyone interested?

Edit: Word say it has 3346 words.

 

[AsylumSeeker]

I can help

Length is okay, a little timid about the pee stufff, I'll look igf no one will... PM me

 

[Lalah]

Thanks for your interest! It may be icky if you don't like the pee stuff. Well the character doesn't really like it yet in this chapter, so I guess you won't be alone. The next chapters if I write them are most likely going to be in the fetish section, now that the character is going to go out of her way to get in those situations.

I'll PM you with more details.